Writing Contest Stories!
Added 2023-07-21 16:16:46 +0000 UTCBad Dobby
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In retrospect, I've been maybe a bit harsh, but I'd like nothing more than to see such a story put properly into words. Keep at it and you'll get there in time.
Walkersebes
2025-01-16 18:22:56 +0000 UTCThe Randall Durham story was unfortunately some of the hardest to read, repeating info dumps, entire sections that feels like you're reading doubled paragraphs and quite a lot of overexposition. Premise was great, but consider keeping it short and simple. A touch of mystery will always win over trying to go over meaningless details and repeating statements. The first ~ 1000 words feel like repeated 3 times with snipets of them repeated again later. To use more modern jargon, basically simping for the crown and duty to the realm.
Walkersebes
2025-01-16 18:17:58 +0000 UTCThe Dobby story is pure genius. 10/10 second chapter when?
TH
2023-07-22 00:35:02 +0000 UTC52k lol. I didn't think some would be so long. I'll set a maximum if we do this again.
Professor Quill
2023-07-21 18:48:03 +0000 UTCHow many words is this all together? You sir, are a monster.
Sage Berthelsen
2023-07-21 18:37:37 +0000 UTCThe HP Foreign Exchange Program and Language of Lust were my favs ;)
SSs34TheElf
2023-07-21 18:12:49 +0000 UTCThat Dobby story requires eye bleach π©
Bellerophon
2023-07-21 17:46:09 +0000 UTCI do not know what to think of the very first part of this when I started reading. I still donβt.
Peter
2023-07-21 17:43:01 +0000 UTC
