Thank you so much for this critique! It's really touching! I appreciate the feedback a whole lot!
Rabid Cowolf
2019-07-27 16:44:25 +0000 UTC
It's a little bulge ;3
Rabid Cowolf
2019-07-27 16:43:20 +0000 UTC
I agree with Tohru, this was really well put together and enjoyable for the reader~
Tizzboi
2019-05-09 00:01:50 +0000 UTC
Talking about how complicated the shot was, I think it flows perfectly once you understand to follow it left to right. And second of all how it flows is so good almost likr a tiny little walk cycle. I would feel super proud of this one. And just as an added little bonus all the varying sizes/bigness is so sureal. I love it when you do scenarios like these. Wonderful job.
Rue
2019-05-07 22:54:55 +0000 UTC
Hehehe it's definitely a complicated one! I hope it ended up readable though ^_^
Rabid Cowolf
2019-05-07 15:21:48 +0000 UTC
Well there's a familiar looking pool toy. ^.==.^
Tombfyre
2019-05-07 14:38:07 +0000 UTC
Uh-oh,... spaghetti-o's
Jeep_Man
2019-05-07 11:17:58 +0000 UTC
such a delightful place to be! Definitely makes me want to dive right on in there as well! <3
Chris-Jon Simmons
2019-05-07 09:48:22 +0000 UTC
Took me a sec to realize she dove into the water. So much stuff happening on this page. XD
SukkuroKun
2019-05-07 07:05:58 +0000 UTC
Is the Orca girl still wearing her fanny pack or is that a bulge?