Princess' Curse (In Progress Sketches)
Added 2017-05-16 21:58:09 +0000 UTC (Spoiler Warning! : Folks who want to be surprised by the comic should wait until later to view these )
The rough thumbnail sketches used to plan out the comic, for those who like seeing a bit into the comic making process. Please enjoy these in progress sketches!
If you have any suggestions or comments on improvements to make before I go to the inking process let me know!
Comments
Ah! I'm glad it all worked out ^u^
Rabid Cowolf
2017-05-25 21:00:38 +0000 UTCOh no wait it's the app, sort about that. X3
Xarnak Ansar
2017-05-23 12:35:28 +0000 UTCFor some reason, the attachments aren't opening for me. I'm not sure why.
Xarnak Ansar
2017-05-22 23:44:01 +0000 UTCWow this is such a nice comment to read through. Really thank you for taking the time to write such a critique, I truly appriciate it <33
Rabid Cowolf
2017-05-17 04:48:09 +0000 UTCaaa wow, this ended up going way bigger than I expected and i am ON BOARD The growth progression in this is captivating, and the story is clear enough from the sketches even without any text, which is a great sign. I adore her inspection of the diverse group of suitors, unaware of her heightening position. This comic also features some of the most amusing faces you've ever drawn - especially her "oh no this is really hot" face on page 4. The indulgent, expansive lustiness is everything the premise promised and more, and that final panel is simply breathtaking. If you're able, it might be nice to have the king and queen on the last page looking on at their mountainous daughter in pride to tie up their story from the beginning. If any of the other suitors survived the growth explosion, maybe they could return for a cameo too. Don't really have any suggestions or critiques otherwise- full steam ahead :D
sp
2017-05-17 02:34:09 +0000 UTCKeeping up the pace of these comics for the last couple of years has done wonders for your sense of composition and scale; this is looking *incredible*, especially that last page.
Balina
2017-05-17 00:42:32 +0000 UTC
