WIP- Sleepless Nights 03
Added 2018-06-17 20:38:39 +0000 UTCThe dialog on this page went through like 10 rewrites hahah ^_^;;....
It's surprisingly hard to write a conversation between two lovers which doesn't feel forced or sappy (I'm looking at you, Attack of the Clones), but with Ozawk and Ghostbane's help I think the conversation between Joshua and Tsenaya comes off as fairly natural with just a little awkward in there to make it realistic.
This also took a bunch of redraws, which is why it's taken so long to get these sketches out, but thankfully the next two pages of Sleepless nights are sketched and will be finished soon!
Comments
Dialog is good here and I am enjoying where this comic is going.
Sesquin
2018-06-20 17:51:13 +0000 UTCYou're tearing me apart Lisa!
Synariel
2018-06-17 21:08:08 +0000 UTCFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU XD
Scappo
2018-06-17 21:02:01 +0000 UTCI hate sand....
Synariel
2018-06-17 20:53:00 +0000 UTC“I dunno wtf you just said but your nerdiness is adorable”
Magitechnician
2018-06-17 20:46:42 +0000 UTCIt came out super adorable!
Kojiro V Ishimaru
2018-06-17 20:42:40 +0000 UTC
