Sleepless Nights- 05
Added 2018-07-29 20:03:53 +0000 UTCEdits: Redrew panels 1, 2 & 3. Also a Plot hole fix! Changed the dialog in the final panel so that she doesn't say his name. She doesn't know it since he died before he could tell her.
I gotta say, drawing Joshua transforming into sand was probably a bit more fun than it should have been. The cracking edges were my favorite part and I actually had to pull back on them because he was starting to look like he was falling apart too early.
The cityscape turning into a desert in the background was also fun to do- I thought that since we don't really notice when the environment in a dream/nightmare changes (at least I don't), neither should Tsenaya.
Sorry little jackal- there's no fixing this! You'll find the web-resolution and inked version in the attachments...
Comments
Shh...it'll be over soon, child.
Scappo
2018-07-30 18:30:41 +0000 UTCScappo? I don't feel so good... D:
ghostbane
2018-07-30 17:47:54 +0000 UTCHave to admit I'm curious as to where this is going to go! Now to just wait for Cerberon my naga-crush to show up _somewhere_ ;u;
Selin Malianis
2018-07-30 07:11:51 +0000 UTCWhy even specify sexually she seems to have a lot of self esteem issues. No thanks to her mother, though I have to wonder if Naliah is the "Gods my daughter is such a straight disappointment" or "Gods my daughter has so much potential that she refuses to live up to" kind
Magitechnician
2018-07-29 22:52:23 +0000 UTCIt's okay I just noticed it too lol
Xionos Aeon
2018-07-29 21:28:33 +0000 UTCWhy have i only noticed her pupils are shaped like diamonds? BLIND.
Brighttail Faux Pas
2018-07-29 21:14:46 +0000 UTCAlso i wonder when she'll get sexually confident, seems like a long journey ahead
Synariel
2018-07-29 21:10:30 +0000 UTCUntrue! She'll just need to find out more about herself first ;)
Scappo
2018-07-29 21:06:28 +0000 UTCSo... much.... blue... jokes....
Synariel
2018-07-29 20:45:32 +0000 UTCit was either that or "i don't feel so good".
Synariel
2018-07-29 20:44:59 +0000 UTCWell, Anakin was pretty serious.
Synariel
2018-07-29 20:44:32 +0000 UTCShe will NEVER find love!!!!
Brighttail Faux Pas
2018-07-29 20:44:03 +0000 UTCYou are an evil. evil man.
Malik Lucas
2018-07-29 20:31:06 +0000 UTCHahahah DAMNIT it's supposed to be a serious page XD!
Scappo
2018-07-29 20:28:46 +0000 UTCTseduction was a LOOONG time ago LOL XD! That Tsenaya isn't canon anymore. This one will still turn blue eventually, but the personality is totally different.
Scappo
2018-07-29 20:28:08 +0000 UTCThe sand effect is really well done, i just found sad he is just an illusion, Tsenaya seem suffering to be alone :(
Nïvhis
2018-07-29 20:16:10 +0000 UTCbut more seriously, is that the same Tsenaya that was featured in the portfolio Tseduction that you did a while back or has it been repconed?
Synariel
2018-07-29 20:15:55 +0000 UTCI don't like sand, it's coarse and rough and irritating and it gets everywhere.
Synariel
2018-07-29 20:14:15 +0000 UTCAt first: "This is a surprisingly vanilla place to go after the last comic. And Tsenaya didn't exactly come off as the kind of girl with this happy a relationship. And didn't she fawn over the guy in the last comic? And... well, it's been awhile but doesn't Joshua looks a whole lot like said guy who died?" well, this explains a lot... Edit: Interesting though that her dream fantasies include the activity her own social anxiety, I mean the fidget box, hiding said fidget box, being embarrassed about going off with her jargon, a partner who did indeed not understand what she was talking about... perhaps it was these things that led me away from realizing what was really going on
Magitechnician
2018-07-29 20:11:28 +0000 UTC
