WIP- Sleepless Nights 08
Added 2018-08-06 17:59:00 +0000 UTC...Aaand she wakes up.
The background is gonna be a city viewed from pretty high up, as Nailah likes to keep her daughter pretty close to her when she's not working at the shipyard. Being a Prefect, you can understand she'd have some pretty swanky dibs at the top of a corporate tower.
That said, Tsenaya's clearly losing sleep over what she saw, but will it affect her work? That's what we get to see next!
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same dude it makes me sad im buying a pillowcase
Glenn Quagmire
2024-07-04 20:35:17 +0000 UTCnow I really want to give her a fuckin hug ;A;
Malwave
2018-08-07 00:28:39 +0000 UTCYes, looks much better. =)
Jaka Torkar
2018-08-06 23:31:16 +0000 UTCPoor girl ....
Nïvhis
2018-08-06 22:56:52 +0000 UTCOK, zoomed out the shot in the 1st panel so it's clearer she's in bed...is that any better?
Scappo
2018-08-06 22:02:50 +0000 UTCYou're right, it doesn't work.
Jaka Torkar
2018-08-06 18:18:01 +0000 UTCOr on the flipside, they should be made even more similar such that the scene and background transition around her... i suppose that doesn’t work great across a page break though
Magitechnician
2018-08-06 18:16:02 +0000 UTCMay I suggest replacing the 1st panel with her being shown in bed, because it looks weird showing a close up on her face, when there's been 2x on the last 2 panels of previous page.
Jaka Torkar
2018-08-06 18:06:39 +0000 UTCSo sad ;_;
Dakota Lesmercy
2018-08-06 18:02:49 +0000 UTC
