Sleepless Nights - 07
Added 2018-08-12 00:24:52 +0000 UTCI decided in the end to simply remove the text from panel 3 because my thinking is that after essentially being disowned by your own mother, you probably wouldn't say much other than to maybe let out a wail of anguish, as Tsenaya does in the final panel.
Actually conveying the emotions of abandonment and despair was surprisingly tricky, and I'm super grateful for all the input and guidance Aktwin Grakata and Razul Wolf gave on the sketches! It really did help me out ^_^.
Also I need to think up a more varied wardrobe for Nailah, but in this particular case I really did like the idea of her continuing to wear her signature white dress.
Comments
Wow, even in Tsenaya's dreams, Nailah's still such a cruel cold-hearted bitch.
LaneFurno
2018-09-18 22:23:17 +0000 UTCMan I love where the storytelling is going.
Sesquin
2018-08-14 17:33:55 +0000 UTCHappy I could help! This turned out real well :) And my gods but Naliah always strikes such an imposing figure
Magitechnician
2018-08-12 01:52:25 +0000 UTC
