Sleepless Nights 10
Added 2018-10-23 20:01:53 +0000 UTCAnd after much futzing with both Tsenaya's and Nailah's faces, as well as turning her oversized shirt into a tanktop so we can see those pretty shoulders, here's the next page!
Having to go back to the two previous pages with Tsenaya in them and change her shirt into being a tanktop was not fun, but it was necessary I think. She's much more appealing now that her shoulders can be seen. The left sleeve is pulled up on the previous page and then right away the right one falls down, which I think is kinda cute :3.
That green glow coming from the floor is turning out to be much handier than I had expected it to be, so I decided to keep it even after Cebron's done transforming.
I also tweaked the dialog a bit to make Cebron seem more eager to please and Tsenaya a bit more comfortable with him being in the room once she wakes up a bit more. I fought with having Cebron's tongue slip out in the lower panel but in the end I decided to have it out since I think he should taste the air a bit more often, especially when he's curious or agitated.
Let me know what you think!
Comments
Hmmm. I wonder what Cebron`s methods of “ helping making someone sleepy “ is.
Mr Stealth
2018-10-24 14:49:58 +0000 UTCOriginally, this was gonna be an 8-10 page vignette, but now it's gonna be a 20-ish page comic. I did try to make it shorter but Cebron fucks Tsenaya in two positions which needed transitions so I couldn't avoid it being so long.
Scappo
2018-10-24 09:30:43 +0000 UTCDid you originally intend for this scene to be so long? Not that I'm complaining, it'll give Ceb the chance to be extra... thorough, with his host.
Lashout
2018-10-24 02:07:05 +0000 UTCI really like the green glow, it' make it really great, i also like the first panel, Cebron eyes are really nice, glowing but not too much it's just perfect. i can't wait to see what will happen next you've some nice way to make some good surprise in your comics ^^
Nïvhis
2018-10-23 20:07:06 +0000 UTC
