WIP- Sleepless Nights 16
Added 2019-02-06 13:42:30 +0000 UTCI'm finding myself having to redraw quite a few of the thumbnails for this comic as I go along...not because the story is changing (because it's not), but because many of the ideas I had back when I first sat down and banged out all the thumbnails for Sleepless Nights were just...bad? Or maybe just not that well thought out.
In any case, I'm much happier with this page now that I've zoomed out quite a bit and let the majority of both their bodies be seen so their positioning is clear before I zoom in on the next page.
I'm really trying to get that "aheago" face in the bottom right panel but despite my efforts it still doesn't seem right? Maybe it's the ballgag getting in the way of her mouth. I'll keep at it and see what we come up with :3.
Comments
Maybe an internal of Cebron filling her mouth with cum? We got to see the outside with her mother, now we get to see the inside with her daughter potentially?
Fyredrake
2019-02-07 02:35:01 +0000 UTCAhh, well that might explain it, at the moment I was confused quite a bit. ^^
Commando Schneider
2019-02-06 22:36:11 +0000 UTCThere's a piece of the story missing I intend to fill in eventually :).
Scappo
2019-02-06 20:31:56 +0000 UTCI had to ask, because I always thought she would hate Cebron ^^
Commando Schneider
2019-02-06 19:37:24 +0000 UTCThanks for the suggestion!
Scappo
2019-02-06 18:15:35 +0000 UTCYes, it's canon :)
Scappo
2019-02-06 18:15:10 +0000 UTCI dunno I think you’re on the right track with the face. Maybe try scrunching that left eyebrow more like the right one is?
Magitechnician
2019-02-06 16:43:58 +0000 UTCI got a little question, maybe I just overread it, but is this sex story canon or not?
Commando Schneider
2019-02-06 16:02:24 +0000 UTCYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES
Selin Malianis
2019-02-06 15:28:54 +0000 UTC
