Sleepless Nights 16
Added 2019-02-10 21:52:31 +0000 UTCEdit: Added thought bubbles for Tsenaya
Eagle-eyed viewers will note that Cebron's pecker has changed in design since we last saw him use it in Skin Deep...fortunately, Cebron being a shape-shifter means he can also change the size, and shape of his cock, so the design change can be explained away. I need to be more careful in the future when designing characters so I don't have to go back and "break" their designs in order to improve upon them!
That said, as I said on the sketch, this page had to be redrawn several times since I felt the switch from oral to vaginal sex needed a zoom-out so we can see what position the characters are in. At first, this page was zoomed in and only Tsenaya's torso was visible with Cebron's dick going into her fun-hole, but that was just so jarring I needed to change it, hence the delay. Usually I'd have at least a couple things out to you guys by now.
Adding words and text continues to be a challenge- I'm wondering what you all think of Cebron's dialog here? I wanted him to be taunting her, but in a playful way. Did it work?
Comments
make it a full fledge feature. have him change the shape of his cock as part of the fun :3
Selth Blackwings
2019-02-18 16:05:26 +0000 UTCThese thought bubbles do add a lot to how Tsenaya feels about it all, I think they're great additions!
Selin Malianis
2019-02-17 15:06:16 +0000 UTCI like when characters, having sex, comment on the reactions of partners to their actions. As I understand it, Cebron, being a genie, must be hundreds of years older than Tsenaya. Consequently, this guy had love affairs with a lot of women. Sibron must feel the reaction of his partner’s body and clearly understand what she is feeling at the moment. It seems to me that in his statements he can make predictions with a sneer, like "Cebron knows that a good girl now feeling this..." "Cebron making his lady feel this..." "And now Cebron will do bad girl hurt, so that later she felt very good..." And perhaps it would be nice if we could read what Tsenaya thinks about. She cannot speak, Cebron cannot hear anything, but we can. I think it would be very nice if we saw how the girl wanted the genie to do this or that, and Cebron would do exactly what she thought, or do something else, even more pleasant. And, as I have already said, she, unlike her partner, is young and inexperienced. She does not understand how Cebron can know what she feels at the moment. As for this page, it is excellent, as always! Tsenaya looks tired but very sexy.))
Alexey Belovolsky
2019-02-12 17:11:26 +0000 UTCthe dialog works for me, it fits his character from what we've seen with him in the past, and I think it works well in this scene.
Vawlkus
2019-02-11 01:55:19 +0000 UTCGood thing gag is solid, I doubt the wall can keep her moans from escaping
The Guard LW
2019-02-11 01:44:29 +0000 UTCSorry for the delay- it's up now!
Scappo
2019-02-11 01:26:17 +0000 UTCNo HD?
Kataphraktarii
2019-02-11 01:03:52 +0000 UTCDefinitely a naughty girl
Synariel
2019-02-10 22:51:35 +0000 UTCBut .... foreplay is best.... ^^ Nah I understand is, everything is alright.
Commando Schneider
2019-02-10 22:44:22 +0000 UTCYeah I thought that too, but I also didn't wanna spend two more pages on foreplay :).
Scappo
2019-02-10 22:43:27 +0000 UTCReally nice pic Scap, but if I compare 15 and 16 with eachother, it feels like there is missing a page, the step of vaginal is a bit to fast, you know? ^^
Commando Schneider
2019-02-10 22:10:10 +0000 UTCExcellent stuff Scappo; I really love the angle and decision to showcase the positioning :>
Selin Malianis
2019-02-10 22:03:48 +0000 UTC
