Sleepless Nights 17
Added 2019-02-17 15:19:12 +0000 UTC*EDIT*: The lullaby singing on this page bothered me from the beginning, as it felt kinda weird and out of place, even for Cebron. I decided to go back and have another look at the dialog on this page, and decided it would be better to go with something else instead.
Now, thanks to Tsenaya's internal dialog, we can see that she really wants to be fucked by someone who actually cares about her, but she's not getting that with Cebron, and he reinforces that in panel 3 where he states he's just giving her what she wants. Not because he loves her, but because somewhere deep down she knows she's not nearly as innocent as she likes to pretend she is.
I like this a lot better since it flows a lot more seamlessly into the dialog on the next page, and isn't as strange as the singing that was there before, but I'm still grateful to Aktwin Grakata, Alexey Belovolsky , and now Tofutiles for their input on this page!
Comments
I hope so I really want tsenaya and her mother to find someone who can love them both and not treat them like sex toys
Mass
2020-04-01 13:37:53 +0000 UTCYup, that's exactly what I was going for- like she's doing this because he's the only one who is willing to do this for her, but she's not getting the "love" she's after. Hopefully that'll change as time goes by and she meets more people!
Scappo
2020-04-01 13:06:43 +0000 UTCYa I just feel like they can do way better then him I just do t like how he treats them
Mass
2020-03-30 13:45:31 +0000 UTC...Some love him, some hate him. I'm just glad you feel something when you think about him! That means I've done my job ^_^!
Scappo
2020-03-30 12:07:51 +0000 UTCI hate cebron with a passion
Mass
2020-03-29 17:11:30 +0000 UTCThis is fucking amazing. Scappo my man you never cease to impress me with your work.
August kowalski
2019-02-20 01:13:32 +0000 UTCAnd saying "ALL!" he plunged as deeply as he could... To sing a lullaby during hard BDSM sex? Only Cebron could come up with such a thing.)) Well, I am sure that he is doing this because he wants only good for Tsenaya.
Alexey Belovolsky
2019-02-17 22:06:25 +0000 UTCI don't think she can sleep with something that big pounding her.
Dragon86
2019-02-17 21:38:40 +0000 UTCHeheeh, "Talented Bastard". Nice :)
Tygon Panthera
2019-02-17 17:32:58 +0000 UTCIdk if his type of rocking will help Tsenaya fall asleep. XD
Synariel
2019-02-17 16:35:51 +0000 UTC*thumbs up*
Magitechnician
2019-02-17 15:49:51 +0000 UTCI love this, your choice of words is great!
Fyredrake
2019-02-17 15:20:59 +0000 UTC
