WIP- Sleepless Nights 22
Added 2019-06-09 14:28:47 +0000 UTCCebron's taking advantage of that wonderfully exposed jackal butt!
In the thumbnail, his back was straight and you couldn't see his muzzle in that bottom panel, but I found that if I made him lean forward he could use his long neck to rest his chin on her head while giving the viewer a bit of a "hiss" with his tongue. This makes that whole bottom panel feel a lot more intimate and less like he's just heartlessly pounding her from behind!
I'm also thinking I might wanna zoom in a bit on that bottom panel, but I'm not sure about that...we'll see what happens as I move forward with the page. For now, please find the version with text in the attachments!
Comments
yep, those angles are gold
Synariel
2019-06-09 20:26:02 +0000 UTCI thought he was finished. But I'm pleasently surprised and happy I'm wrong lol
Malwave
2019-06-09 14:57:49 +0000 UTCI like it a lot! Her shirt falls so nice. Only adds to the casual, not planned encounter at night. Also like his face here, being over her accents his dominance while at the same time it makes the scene more personal between the two of them if that makes sense.
Rhazz
2019-06-09 14:56:18 +0000 UTCThat last panel is quite intimate. I like it!
Matthew Colten
2019-06-09 14:52:35 +0000 UTCLooks nice, but will we see anything other than vaginal?
Prawn
2019-06-09 14:33:52 +0000 UTCThese pages keep getting hotter and hotter. And I agree scappo, having him leaning forwards in that one panel does make it seem less forced. Your attention to detail and the actual audience is amazing as always!
Fyredrake
2019-06-09 14:31:23 +0000 UTCI'm so happy to see this page; almost started missing Cebron! Though now I can look forward to this and the character poll results :D
Selin Malianis
2019-06-09 14:29:52 +0000 UTC
