May I suggest an ammendment? Its with the second page, specifically with when the reverse mage and mage start arguing, The mage says that the reverse mages are no different from monsters, only for the reverse mage to retort "we do not"
Followed by the mage responding "do to" i would suggest changing that to "we are not" and "are too" aside from that, I love the work, the designs are adorable, the shading is well beyond what I am currently capable of, and I live its general style. I hope my initial comment wasn't too rude.
