BLAIR | Chapter. 38: Demon Or Elf, All The Same
Added 2022-09-13 06:46:11 +0000 UTCThis post has been taken down for KU
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Blair can detect the difference, provided she is not angry at that moment, and provided they don't attack her first! She isn't super keen on ambushes after all.
Azrie
2022-09-14 03:04:42 +0000 UTCThat's fair, I struggle to mix in her character development with the aspects of progression. In the end, I kind of write whatever feels right. And in spite of how impulsive Blair is, it did not feel wrong to second guess whether to sneak attack or not, specially considering the previous kid thing had happened not too long ago. Though I do try to keep the plot moving.
Azrie
2022-09-13 12:58:51 +0000 UTCBlair spends a lot of time paralysed in a lot of chapters. It's I either 0 or 100 with her, she has real trouble with knowing what she wants.
Arkeus
2022-09-13 09:13:55 +0000 UTCI read fast because your story is so compelling. :-) „Besides which, I think all the Elves must be destroyed“ At least the non Dark Elves and maybe only the Nazi Elves - but I’m not sure if Blair can detect a difference. :-)
Quendolayne
2022-09-13 07:09:13 +0000 UTC
