Friendly Fyre: Chapter 33 - Fyreneth’s Will
Added 2024-11-16 13:00:04 +0000 UTCWe gather around Beryl’s bedside. There’s no sign of injury. Her bloody clothes have been replaced, and all the cuts and bruises she sustained from the Jorrians healed. But she’s never looked so old to me before, and she rests there with her eyes closed, breathing slowly, despite being awake.
Nek, Dizzi, Mirzayael, Torim and I are all seated by the bed. Mirzayael clears her throat.
“I’m sorry to disturb your recovery, Elder Beryl, but it has come to my attention that the decision has been made on behalf of the community to flee back toward the Ash Peak mountains, and this is an option I will not accept.”
Good to see she’s as diplomatic as ever.
The others exchange uncomfortable glances.
Beryl cracks her eyes open. “I did not agree to this course of action lightly.” Her voice is quiet and gravelly. “But the safety of our people should always be our top priority.”
“If we stay here, we’ll be slain,” Torim says. “Surely you see we can’t fight them? Their kingdom outnumbers us ten to one.”
“I see that your fear of conflict has clouded your reasoning,” Mirzayael shoots back. “This is our home. If we lose it, what does that make us? What does that say of Fyreneth’s legacy?”
“Homes can be replaced,” Beryl sighs. “Lives cannot.”
“I hate to say it, but they’re right,” Nek adds. “I don’t want to leave, but I don’t see an alternative. Protecting our families matters above all else.”
“And how will they be protected out on the ice?” Mirzayael demands. “Fleeing for indefensible mountains almost twenty leagues away. Now that they’re watching for us, we will all be picked off before we can even arrive.”
“Do you have some alternatives to suggest?” Dizzi asks. “‘Cause look, I’d rather stay here, too. This place—these people—are all amazing. But if Jorria wages war, we can’t hope to defeat them.”
“Perhaps that’s true,” I cut in as Mirzayael’s eyes begin to twitch. “Though we hold a defensible position here. We don’t need to beat them with numbers if we can cause their troops to bottleneck and pick them off in more manageable numbers.”
Torim grumbles. “If at all possible, a direct conflict should be avoided entirely. If we can escape without any further loss of life, that is the path we should pursue.”
“Then what about Fyre and Ollie?” Mirzayael demands. “Don’t they deserve to live as well?”
The others look at me, perplexed.
“What does she mean, Fyre?” Dizzi asks.
I grimace. “Regardless of what you all decide, I have to stay here. My Role—the magic I have access to—prevents me from leaving.”
“Prevents you?” Dizzi cries. “What does that mean?”
“Exactly what it sounds like,” Mirzayael snaps. “She can’t leave.”
“I’m… obligated to stay here and protect the Fortress,” I say. “It seems it is my duty to fight for this place, whether or not anyone else remains. Ollie’s magic also binds him to me, meaning he might not be able to venture far from the caves either. Honestly it’s lucky he hasn’t hit a range limit yet while he’s been out hunting. Perhaps, due to his larger size…”
Mirzayael can probably tell I’m getting sidetracked by theories, as she cuts in once more. “Regardless, she can’t leave, and that’s all that matters.”
“It sounds less like a type of magic and more like a type of curse,” Torim says. “You do not know how to remove it? How was it placed on your originally?”
I shake my head. “As soon as I woke up here, it was already a part of me.”
“It’s not a curse,” Nek says. “It’s Fyreneth’s will.”
I open my mouth to object, but his words strangely make sense. It would have been her will to protect this place and her people, wouldn’t it? She would have wanted them guarded even after her death. Maybe it’s why I woke where she died, why I was reborn in her form. Some ghost of her lived on, etched into the stones of this place, and when I woke up here, it shaped me as well.
Certainly, the idea that I’ve inherited her last wishes is more palatable than being perceived as her reincarnation.
I give Nek a strange look. “Perhaps there is something to that idea.”
“But why didn’t you tell us before?” Dizzi demands. “We can’t just leave you to die! Did you really think we’d be okay with that?”
“I didn’t think it was my place to object to your plans,” I say. “The safety of your own people comes first, and I didn’t want to risk that.”
Beryl lets out a labored sigh. “Fyre. You are as much part of us as the returned Fyrethians.”
“Moreso,” Mirzayael says. “You’ve been with us longer. Given so much to us.”
“We’re not going to leave you here,” Nek fiercely adds.
Torim clears his throat uncomfortably. “Are you suggesting we don’t move forward with the migration? Even if Fyre occupies an important position of authority within the community, is it enough to risk the lives of the rest of us?”
“That’s precisely what I didn’t want,” I start, but Beryl silences me with a sharp gesture.
“Until I finally keel over, I still intend to lead this community,” she says. “But I can’t make the right choices without being provided all available information. In the future, you will be forthcoming with me about any hesitations you might have or obstacles you might foresee. Is that understood?”
I dip my head in apology. “Of course. That makes complete sense.”
“Then it’s settled, is it?” Mirzayael asks. “We remain and fight for our home.”
“I’m in,” Dizzi says. “Whatever skills I can offer, I’d love to help. Especially artificing skills. I’m really good at that. Actually, that’s about all I have to offer.”
“I will also lend my aid however it’s needed,” Nek agrees.
Torim frowns as everyone turns to look at him expectantly. “Retaining our homeland would be preferable. But I want assurances I won’t be leading my people into a deathtrap.” He looks to me. “You mentioned we might have the advantage of being in a defensible position. Do you have any ideas to back up your claim?”
I hold up my wrist. “The Dungeon Core—Fyreneth’s Crown—whatever you prefer to call it, is a powerful tool. I can already think of a dozen ways it could assist in a siege. So long as I remain within range of the mana ore and am able to pull more mana from its source, the Core will have access to some extremely powerful options. It could open chasms beneath the approaching armies. Collapse walls on top of them. Change the passages they walk through, leading them into a labyrinth of deadends. And that’s just the mundane approaches involving moving rock about. Altering chemical and thermal properties could prove just as potent.”
Torim looks a little startled by my suggestions. Even Nek’s eyebrows are raised.
Dizzi just laughs. “I’m glad you’re on our side.”
“Indeed,” Mirzayael says. “But we could speak strategy all day. First we need to establish if anyone else wishes to express doubt. If you believe we should still make a bid for the Ash Peaks, now is the time to say so.”
Silence stretches between us. Even Torim merely shakes his head.
“Good,” Beryl says after a moment. “Go tell the rest to stop packing. We have a siege to plan for.”
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As the others hurry about, scurrying off to track down the scouts and put a stop to the migration preparations, I pull Mirzayael aside.
“I was truthful when I said we will likely win the siege,” I tell her. “Down here, we do have home-field advantage. However, I worry this plan is shortsighted.”
“You mean mistaking winning the battle for winning the war,” Mirzayael says.
I nod. “The mana ore down here is incredibly potent, but it’s not an unlimited resource. If this becomes a war of attrition, we will eventually deplete the resource that is keeping us alive, and after that we’ll be indefensible.”
“Are you suggesting we should flee after all?” Mirzayael says.
“No. Not today.” I chew on my lip, mind flipping through and discarding a dozen different ideas. “But mobility will be necessary eventually.”
“What are you suggesting?” she asks.
“I’ve been mulling over an idea,” I say. “More of a vision, really. I hadn’t intended to implement it anytime soon. Building up the community’s resources comes first. But given the Jorrian attack, I think the timeline needs to be expedited.”
“What sort of vision?” she asks.
“I believe we can raise Fyreneth’s Fortress once more,” I say. “However, it would not be exactly as Fyreneth originally intended. This version would be far more defensible.”
Mirzayael raises an eyebrow. “Explain.”
And I do. I lay out all my plans, ideas that have been gestating since Dizzi and I first learned the Fortress was designed to be unearthed. “We’ll need to be conservative with our mana stores,” I add at the end. “And I’ll need to enhance the structural integrity of the Fortress, first. I’m worried moving so much earth might cause parts of it to come apart.”
At first Mirzayael looks awed, then she laughs. “Your dreams really do know no bounds. But do you think we’ll have time for such elaborate preparations?”
“I’m not sure,” I admit. “If Beryl and the others sign off on the idea, Dizzi and I can get started on the work right away. But if we don’t finish in time…” My stomach twists into a knot at the idea. We’ll be thrown into battle. A real war. If I can’t stop it, people will die. “We’ll need to prepare for the battle regardless. But I’ll do everything in my power to keep this kingdom safe.”
It’s a promise I hope I can keep.
Comments
I'm out of school now! Although I more work on the aerospace engineering side of things currently: doing spaceship stuff. But I'd love to move more back to the science side of things someday... if I don't end up writing queer fantasy books fulltime! Haha
Kia Leep
2024-11-21 02:34:25 +0000 UTC*fist bump* Omg! You are now my favorite author! Your the first author I ever met who majored in astrophysics AND you write queer books. So awesome! Are you still doing astrophysics things? Like, are you in a grad program or done with school?
Foxner
2024-11-20 04:28:40 +0000 UTCI'm delighted to hear you're enjoying the story so far! I hope you like the way I've taken things for the rest of the book. And hey, I also majored in astrophysics! *fist bump*
Kia Leep
2024-11-20 02:37:56 +0000 UTCIm all caught up now ): . I've really enjoyed this story and I'm surprised it's not more popular. I really want to leave a critique, but I should really start studying for my midterm, and last time I left a author a critique, I did a really poor job 😞. Maybe after my midterm I'll come back and leave a critique... Anyways, as for the future direction of the novel, I'm pretty worried about Fyre and Ollie. Given their roles, it would be logical for their to be a "Hero" role to vanquish the Dragon and Dark Lord. And slightly more concerning is narratively speaking, there might not be a win condition for Fyre and Ollie since if they defeat one Hero, it's very possible more Heros will rise. Of course it could also just be the case that if the Hero is defeated, no other Hero role will be given. I mentioned a few chapters ago that I hope Fyre and everyone else breaks down the battle and learn from the analysis; I still really hope they do that. The humans in general seem far more experienced with battles, so everyone has some catching up to do and very little time/opportunity to do it. As for the science/war side of things, Fyre really has a ton of options (some far more unethical than others). Fyre can manipulate the terrain to the point it would make the Vietnam War look like a breeze. She can decimate supply lines and harase the humans with gorilla warfare (she will likely loose pretty horribly in a traditional head to head battle--they have more people, more experience, more knowledge, more resources, and more infrastructure/capital). She can make the terrain so difficult to cross that they either have to fly or constantly dig through the terrain (like making the entire surface covered in sharp jagged rocks of varying sizes that randomly respawn, and the gaps in between can be water or some kind of mud that has tiny sharp rocks mixed in, or something corrosive). She can seal tunnels and fill them with gas (CO2 might be the sneakiest) or no air at all. She could fill nearby tunnels with some alkali metal (potassium, sodium, etc) and increase humidity. She could flood the tunnels with water. She could use chemical weapons like flooding the tunnels with hydrogen sulfide gas (H2S--its colorless, super flammable, explosive when mixed in air, and kills pretty fast at high concentrations) which she can probably find in/near that mana filled river, especially if she finds exactly where the heat vent is. If she was feeling extra unethical, she could use the old biological warfare tactic of throwing rotting corpses at the humans to spread disease. I don't remember how the core specifically works, but she could possibly make radioactive isotopes too. As for technology that Fyre can make, I don't really know. She can work on making guns, bombs, and other things that changes how people do war (so it makes the human's tactical experience null). But she doesn't have much infrastructure in place to start improving technology like weapons. The Dungeon core might be able to supplement the lack of infrastructure, but Fyre can't spend all her time producing things for everyone, she needs time to learn, train, and organize everything. Anyways, those are my initial thoughts and possible directions for future chapters. Feel free to ask me anything, I'm majoring in astrophysics and research blackholes, so I can probably help out with science questions if you need it.
Foxner
2024-11-18 19:07:03 +0000 UTC