The Liberation preview
Added 2020-08-01 08:15:59 +0000 UTCIn the poll for the next comic, "Liberation" wins Old Sayuri.
https://www.patreon.com/posts/which-sayuri-do-38797437
Sayuri, by chance, finds herself in a mysterious room filled with torches, there are two large mirrors and two burning balls of different colors in the front hall, she cannot imagine who is expecting her.
What do you think about this? We really love how her outfit came out. If you have any feedback, let us know!
Comments
I must no forget the great Ashley, Miro and Dialup Hero of course. triple Doh!!!
ZanyFoxLlama
2020-08-01 13:29:17 +0000 UTCThere may be errors in the text, but everything will be corrected in the final version, and we will take into account all your suggestions.
3DX851
2020-08-01 13:25:17 +0000 UTCI think the torch lights should be bigger if you have that much floating embers in the air maybe but apart from that it is very good. It sets a scene of mystery and intrigue. Where you meaning "Where am I, What Kind of place is this" then "Hello!!!" then "Is anybody there" I hope I don't offend you writing this. Sorry if I did. I do like your work and you are defiantly up there with The Dude, Forged, Nyl, Rigid, Rikolo and Supro in my opinion. Thanks
ZanyFoxLlama
2020-08-01 13:01:40 +0000 UTC
