Update Chap 7.1
Added 2023-09-09 15:21:21 +0000 UTCWoke up to a particularly scathing review about how Tanya lost the fight.
Took it personally.
Updated the chapter with a few more lines and revised paragraphs. Some more internal monolgoues and fixed up missing sentences and formating that was lost during the transfer.
If you want to see all these changes I recommend re-reading from the line. (And giveing it a good 20-30 minutes to you should see Edit 2 9/9: on the bottom.)
"Didn't you say we shouldn't kick someone when they were down?"
(For a complete list of changes, please read the changelog located on my computer.)
