Thoughts
Added 2023-09-15 06:22:21 +0000 UTCLate night thinking-
The plan for this story was to have a twist reveal of somthing in a few chapters, that would dramatically change how a certain character acts in the story, while also leaving breadcrumbs throughout the story leading up to the twist that could later be looked at as "ohhhhh that's why~/what~"
The problem that im feeling now is that until we get to the twist/reveal, I feel like people are dropping/ getting turned off from the story cause it's going slow.
And I'm starting to think when the reveal does happen people aren't going to like it-will feel like it comes out of nowhere... cause only one person has commented about it. (So I don't think I've given enough bread crumbs?) Idk
I don't want to speed up the story, cause I want to build up character relationships and world building.
... idk. what do you all think?
