"The Ample Lake Burster - Chapter 20" - Inflation/Popping
Added 2024-05-17 17:12:28 +0000 UTCHere's the 20th chapter of my serialized inflation novel, "The Ample Lake Burster". The next chapter is the final one (unless I decide it needs a little epilogue; I haven't quite settled on that yet)
A strange flash above Camp Ample Lake attracts the attention of Sheriff Sutton.
Comments
Yep. I knew you wouldn't introduce bunch of named characters that would never show up again. Hoping for a big hyena bursting somehow next chapter.
Crowbar
2024-05-18 01:41:44 +0000 UTCReread the chapter. There's a lot of cackling from the Burster this time... Hyenas really like cackling... Deputy Marsh is a hyena... OH SHIT, I'M FUCKING RIGHT. The Ample Lake Burster isn't a ghost, just a crazed hyena!
Tyler Hagenbaugh
2024-05-17 17:33:46 +0000 UTC2 things here. 1: Sutton's sacrifice may be just the thing Dante needs to escape. 2: Sutton recognized the Burster's voice, huh? Here's my big theory. I was under the impression that the Burster was a vengeful spirit, like what Webb thought. Maybe that's not the case. Maybe... The Ample Lake Burster... Is Deputy Marsh?
Tyler Hagenbaugh
2024-05-17 17:23:25 +0000 UTC
