There was a mistake in the coloring which complicated the dark brown color of the parasite. It will take some time to fix this issue. Sorry about that. I see other things now that I can fix along with that. Because this page has a little more work, I will not post it outside of Patreon yet.
Anyways, I slanted the panel borders to emphasize action. The borders are relatively thin because if they were thick, that would indicate a different scene and a longer passage of time.
It holds her mouth open by grabbing the area under her lips but above her chin and pulling tightly. She can't close her mouth.
The last image overlapping the border highlights it and makes it more energetic.
Her hair is squeezed against her head by the tentacles. In the second panel it squeezes her breasts upward. It also lifts her right leg.
There is something primitively appealing about the rough handling such as being pulled from the chair. The excitement can be interpreted sometimes by some people as arousing. That doesn't mean though that gentle willing sex isn't appealing, it's just variety. I have plans for a more romantic comic with story involved.
What happens in the next few pages I promise will be very inventive ;)
The timelapses have been recorded so don't worry, they will still be uploaded.
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