Predators page 14 sketch
Added 2015-10-30 21:23:37 +0000 UTCSo this page will be kind of a transition/development for Rehzi's character. Mihari leading and convincing him on, riding away, the words and feel all to push him in the right direction. He's enjoying it, for sure, but isn't sure if he has what it takes to try being the dominant one for now. Maybe if he's pushed hard enough though...we'll see! Working on this page to be ready for Monday when I start sending out the ZIP files for you guys; Sunday is Nov. 1st and voting and stuff will start then!
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Hrmm I'll check that out and see if i can adjust it, thanks!
FluffKevlar
2015-10-31 19:11:16 +0000 UTCIf it's not too late: In the final panel, the positions and angles of the characters' respective pelves look wrong for any penetration as this would have his penis pointing at around 10 o'clock instead of the about noon-to-1 o'clock that would align with her vagina. They need to be closer together. I do love how her breast rests on his face.
Nathan G.
2015-10-31 03:44:31 +0000 UTC
