Red Princess, Page 3 (nip edit)
Added 2016-05-25 02:54:39 +0000 UTC(edit: wasn't easy to read what was going on with her nips, so adjusted them some)
Page 3! All about dancing. Dancing is a big part of Ayn's character, not just for the reasons explained in this page, but it's also what she learns to fight with later on, something like a..capoeira+krav maga style I've had in mind I'll explain sometime.
I had a lot of trouble with this page though, not art-wise but layout, dialogue...it used to be a very different page initially, more porn-y, but I'm glad i changed it and I think re-worded some stuff better than what it was before. I've done plenty of direct porn with Ayn, I want to put character first for this short comic. only 2-3 more pages, so I'm going to toss up some ideas for the next comic soon.
Cameos by Blackhawk's Hawke, Setsune, Adelisio's Vixen, and Styx!
(hopefully I didn't get anything super wrong)
Enjoy!
Comments
Oh, just lighting
FluffKevlar
2016-05-25 20:55:33 +0000 UTCI just noticed... that green aura around her, is that a lighting effect, or is that.... her, like, a power within her?
Silvador
2016-05-25 15:15:29 +0000 UTC*GASP* Styx! :D There he is!! :3
Styx Renegade
2016-05-25 11:06:33 +0000 UTCWhereas I feel the new dialogue is more personable and more...Ayn-like, I guess. It feels more appropriate for the character to me. To each their own!
UltraFennec
2016-05-25 04:38:57 +0000 UTCHonestly, I think I preferred the dialogue from before. This new dialogue, to me, seems more restrained, where as before it felt more unbridled and earnest. *shrug* Just my personal opinion. It's still a good page.
Silvador
2016-05-25 03:31:39 +0000 UTCWhoo, my vixen looks awesome, thanks <3
Adleisio Cefnfor
2016-05-25 03:24:17 +0000 UTC
