Chapter 1,158.
Added 2023-11-28 18:57:59 +0000 UTC"We survived?" Bubbur muttered with disbelief when the escape pod's screams from having its hull twisted and rent calmed down to a cautionary susurrus.
The vessel seemed just as surprised to have survived the journey through that chaos, and the atmosphere was suddenly sucked out of a breach. Emily quickly grabbed Galau and another soldier before the whole thing collapsed, and they were spat out into the boundless expanse of outer space.
She had seen which way the wind blew and had already put on her spacefaring kit. Two talismans activated, forming layered defensive shields that allowed them to be swept away on the spatial winds, adding more distance from the tower. The moment Emily thought it safe, she took out a pod of her own and dragged the two inside.
Wayward soldiers were picked up in quick order, but Emily refused to steer her skipper away from the tower. She was waiting, her attention fully on the screens displaying the outsides.
A two-hundred-meter-long stretch of ancient stone silently floated behind them—the upper section of the Sixth Centurion Lighthouse. The rest of the tower or the huge scarred platform Zac described were nowhere to be seen. Neither were there any hints of Zac. Her heart was gripped with anxiety, wondering if something had gone wrong.
Thankfully, it was impossible to mistake the tower section for a piece of rubble separated from the rest of the structure. There were no hints of damage, apart from the severed section still reeking of ancient Killing Intent. Neither were there any signs of the spatial storm they'd narrowly passed through. Instead, the tower was surrounded by a spiral of gently flowing lights.
New motes of spatial splendor were continuously appearing from a radiant haze at the tower's bottom end. Emily could barely discern a foreign sky and another section of the tower within—a different dimension. The lights traveled along the structure to a similar gate on the other end, and it seemed as though the tower was being transformed before their very eyes.
"He won't appear here," Galau said with a somber expression. "The twisted space is unraveling, stretching space across millions of miles and multiple dimensions. Every second will take him further and further away."
"Is that why we all had to cram into one pod?" Emily said, her frazzled emotions amplified by the memory of passing through the storm while packed like sardines.
"You saw the state of the third one," Average shrugged. "Doubt it'd have survived."
"That token he used…" Galau hesitated. "I saw markings of the Starfall Lighthouse and that of my—"
"Forget about that thing," Emily snapped as she levied a murderous look on the group of castaways. "In fact, don't mention anything about the seals on the outside until you're back with your people. Probably not even then."
"Why not? Just what are those things?" Average asked with a frown.
Emily shot a hesitant glance at the shimmering tower before taking a steadying breath. The situation had already reached this point. She couldn't help Zac against that smooth-faced monster, but she could at least make sure these meatheads wouldn't get him in trouble after he emerged. So, Emily briefly explained the situation with the trial and how it had impacted the war.
"You're saying sealbearers have become a commodity, and the Peak Family wouldn't be able to protect me even if they wanted," Galau sighed. "Sounds like another prison is waiting outside. Or worse, we'll become pawns used to reveal the trial's hidden dangers."
Emily pursed her lips as she looked at the crestfallen merchant. Or rather, Array Master, a skill that they sorely lacked back home without Kenzie around. Someone who could fix all the defective weapons she'd stockpiled, who could provide insights into her Axe Array. He didn't even look half-bad.
And while the rest of these people looked a bit dumb, they all had incredibly stable auras and great survival instincts. They were even better than the talents they'd snagged in the Red Sector. Instead of worrying about things she couldn't control, maybe she should do some recruiting.
"Hey, Shartermaster, which seal did you get?" Emily asked as she leaned closer with big eyes. "Do you need a place to stay?"
"I thought we weren't supposed to talk about it?" Galau countered, his shifty eyes rife with distrust. "And what do you mean—"
"Ah, little queen, I'm a Sealbearer of the Tethered Court," Bubbur quickly interjected as he squeezed over. "Not bad, right? So how about—"
"What? You're a sealbearer?" Emily said with shock before her eyes thinned with suspicion. "Wait. You're less than a hundred years old?"
"Only a kid just shy of 90," Bubbur grinned. "I don't know? We just end up looking like this after entering the Muscle Brigade."
"Were they just handing out seals to anyone in there?" Emily muttered while flicking an arc of lightning at the overly enthusiastic barbarian. "Come on, what about you, handsome?"
Galau rolled his eyes but relented. "I guess Bubbur would rat me out anyway. I'm a Threadwinder of the Daedalian Court."
"Daedalian?" Emily said, her eyes gleaming.
Could this be the answer to the riddle that had plagued Zac for over a decade? When he first got the quest to collect Outer Court Cycles, progress was already 4/6. At that time, the only known sealbearer by his side was Ogras, which left them incredibly confused.
As time passed, they had solved parts of the mystery. She was obviously one of the four, having already gotten her first piece of the Radiant Court. But to this day, the numbers failed to add up. The cycle was complete while lacking a Threadwinder. Was it Galau all along?
"Why not go with them? We know you weren't planning to return to the army, anyway. You've even mentioned hiding out with the boss on his System-shrouded planet," Average grinned, further cementing Emily's theory.
Someone would only be included in their cycle if they felt they belonged to their side. The only other Threadwinders Zac knew were his undead girlfriend and some guy in the Radiant Temple, but they were already spoken for by their respective factions.
"You too, Bubbur. I need to go back to my family, but there's no reason you should become a pawn to the outsiders."
"We can protect you," Emily eagerly nodded at Galau. "Uh, you too, Bubbur."
"Protect me? I haven't forgotten why Zac came to the Tower of Eternity," Galau said with a roll of his eyes. "Or how many people he ended up offending instead of finding a backer for his newly integrated planet. And there's no way such a troublemaker has kept a low profile while we were trapped. Can you even protect yourself?"
"We're a young faction, but we're doing alright," Emily grinned as she took out a couple of identity tokens, including those of the Allbright Empire and the Dravorak Dynasty. "Things have changed since you guys met in the Tower of Eternity. Teacher is doing pretty well for himself these days. Our faction has diplomatic relationships with half the top factions of the sector.
"That old Redeemer guy hasn't dared show his face for years, and the elders of the Heliophos Clan have already sent us a bunch of apology gifts. We're rich as all hell, our armies are the best decked-out in the sector, and we have multiple people on the war contribution ladders."
"How in the…" Galau muttered as he looked at the tokens with suspicion.
Bubbur wasn't as hard a sale. "I'm willing!"
Emily nodded with satisfaction. Her pitch was already a well-oiled machine after years of practice. Unfortunately, her real target wasn't as easily convinced.
"This smells like a sales trick. Is anything you said true? About you, about the seals."
"It's all true, you paranoid bastard," Emily swore. "You'll find out the truth as soon as you return, anyway. The bounties are public. You're literally a walking commodity right now."
"Then what are you guys relying on?" Galau countered. "Have you already sold yourself to the outsiders? Or do you have some valuable resources? Because there's no way a little D-grade faction will garner much attention from the established factions, no matter how impressive your teacher is."
Emily was surprised at how quickly Galau figured it out, which only made her want him more. Zac had raised a faction with fine warriors and standout elites. But she had to admit, most people at the top were good at fighting and nothing else. Just look at their sealbearers. Zac's meathead camp so overwhelmingly outnumbered the 'coalition for reason' that her fellow Lightbringer, Carl Elrod, had a mental breakdown and began calling himself a janitor.
"A little bit of both. We have a working agreement with the Undead Empire, but we're more like independent contractors. It was teacher who ended the eternal war and brought the Kavriel Province to Zecia's side. Without his contribution, the war would have looked a lot different right now. Oh, teacher also happens to own the best Cosmic Vessel Shipyard in the sector. Our wares have proven pretty effective on the battlefield."
"As expected of the man who summoned the Stele of Conflict," Galau sighed as he glanced at the soldiers around him. "It's not impossible for me to join you. However, I have a few demands."
"What's that?"
"I accumulated a lot of knowledge in there. Schematics, blueprints, weaponry. I need you to find a way to disseminate those methods. I don't care about money. I just want the inventions I've carried for years to kill as many invaders as possible. My comrades gave up everything everything to get me and my knowledge this far. I want them to matter. I want their sacrifice to matter."
A subdued silence filled the room as eight sets of eyes focused on Emily. She almost felt she could see the outlines of their fellow brigadiers standing behind them and the unbreakable determination in their eyes.
"I promise," Emily solemnly nodded. "If we can make them, we'll sell them at cost. If we can't, we'll find the right partners so that the blueprints won't reach the Kan'Tanu."
Any further discussion was interrupted by a beeping signal. Emily swore at the console and quickly took out a change of clothes and forged identities for Bubbur and Galau.
"Remember! In case we don't get killed in the next minute, you two are soldiers of the Acheron Company of the Atwood Empire!" Emily urged before glaring at the others. "And not a word from you guys!"
Emily solemnly gazed at the screen as a monstrous dreadnought, unlike any Cosmic Vessel she'd ever seen, tore through space, appearing just a few dozen miles from their position. It was impossible to tell whether it belonged to the Alliance, the Kan'Tanu, or some outsiders. The only thing she knew for certain was that it was ancient and that it held the power to take on a whole armada.
Escaping was out of the question. The earlier warning was a two-hit combo of space being sealed and a spatial breach. Thank god the tower had already shifted out of their dimension as it continued its activation. Neither did the other seem to recognize it. The Muscle Brigade mutely stared at the incoming vessel, their eyes as wide as saucers.
"Holy crap."
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The cloaked men were unmoving like statues as Yrin gazed at the Royal Orb in his hand. They were witnesses of the Seventh Edge, their role just to observe. For now. The cardinal stood by Yrin's side, eyes half-closed as he sensed the changes in the Imperial Qi. Suddenly, his eyes shot open as pupils and sclera were replaced by radiant purple.
"There has been a shift in the order," an ancient voice came from the young clergyman's throat.
It was a necessary step, even if Yrin didn't require any outside input to confirm the changes. He could feel how the clouds of Purple Qi darkened before being forcibly stabilized by the accumulated providence of the Tobrial Dynasty. Yrin briefly closed his eyes before turning to Ylvin. The Monarch looked back with a complex gaze, understanding what must be done.
"Call him home."
There was neither joy nor sorrow upon learning that his younger brother had failed. Not even the fact that his Imperial Qi had been forcibly dispersed, which could only mean regicide, created a ripple in his heart. It was part of the natural order and the cycle of any dynasty. Rulers came and went, becoming a link in an ever-growing chain. Hopefully, they would leave behind something greater than what they inherited. Even if not, that was just another hurdle to overcome.
Empires had their ebb and flow, and succession was a chance to turn fate around.
"Yes, Your Highness," Ylvin sighed before activating the crucible.
A flood of Imperial Qi poured out of the Royal Orb and entered the ancient stele, and Yrin added a drop of his blood. A gate through time and space, connected through lineage, formed. A bedraggled figure surrounded by immensely fell air appeared before the crucible, and it took a moment for Yrin to connect the figure with his mercurial brother.
Yrin thoughtfully looked at his brother's wounds, trying to envision the battle that brought him to this state. It wasn't easy. The large hole in his torso held lingering hints of plant-based lifeforce, while his Soul Aperture was flooded with ancient Killing Intent. Finally, there were multiple traces of Technocrat presence, including something drilled into his skull.
Ylvin growled with anger and forcibly dispersed the sinister energies with a wave of his hands before reducing the device to ash with a burst of light. It made Yselio's eyes flicker open, and they soon focused on Yrin.
"Ah, so you're the one they picked, brother," Yselio wheezed as a bloody smile appeared on his face.
"You knew?" Yrin said before slightly shaking his head. "Of course you did."
"Competition is the Heavenly Path, and this mission can't be shouldered by me alone," Yselio said as he tried to sit up, only to fail and fall back down.
His red eyes turned to the band of stars above like he was searching for secrets hidden within their constellation. Or perhaps he simply didn't have the heart to look at those present after being discarded by fate. A rough laugh more resembling a groan escaped Yselio's throat, and small red bubbles formed around his mouth.
"You ousted one outside party and weakened two more. And despite your failure inside the fortress, we managed to seize four more seals on the outside," Yrin calmly said. "I will report your achievements in hopes that our Royal Father will recover you when this chapter is concluded."
"You always were a straight arrow," Yselio smiled, his eyes unmoving. "I hope my small contribution has smoothened the road ahead."
"Your wounds hold the taint of the Selvari," Yrin said. "Are they responsible for your current state?"
"The Selvari? You could say that. The price of curiosity is steep," Yselio muttered, his gaze growing distant as he finally turned back to Yrin. "My dear brother, between truth and Empire, what's most important?"
Yselio's cultivation was rapidly dispersing while the ancient Killing Intent consumed his soul. Despite that, a sense of unease shook the normally impermeable fortress of Yrin's heart. Who better knew how dangerous Yselio was than his siblings?
"Empire is truth."
A streak of unstoppable swordlight split Yselio in two. Dao of Technology and Killing Intent were crushed by imperial might, leaving only Yrin's intent and Imperial Qi behind. Yrin sheathed his blade and lightly tapped the air to redirect the incoming attack.
"You heartless bastard, what are you doing?" Ylvin glowered. "Despite his failure, Yselio should have been given his rites."
"The trajectory has changed, and I have my instructions," Yrin said as he covered the bisected corpse. "My brother has always been capricious, and I couldn't let him do anything that might harm our efforts."
"I'm sure it has nothing to do with the opportunity," Ylvin snorted as he pointedly looked at the glowing light pouring from Yselio's wounds.
A moment later, a mysterious rune rose from his chest, prompting the Imperial Qi to form a swirl of fate and future.
"The Seventh Edge greets Lord Vindicator," the observers intoned, and Yrin stepped forward.
The swirling Qi welcomed his approach, though Yrin frowned upon feeling a slight disturbance within. He wanted to destroy it and the seal before they could taint the dynasty's providence. But he couldn't. He'd been chosen, so he would bring the Ultom Courts back to the Seventh Heaven, destroying all obstacles in his path.
He touched the rune, and the world turned dark.
"So, how is it?" Ylivin asked when Yrin emerged from the dissipating haze. "I hear those things contain amazing truths for the fated."
Yrin glanced at the empty husk bereft of soul and future and shook his head before turning to the sky.
"Truth..." he muttered, a small smile tugging at his lips.
Comments
Nah. I think he realized he was facing the Void Emperor—which supersedes their Empire.
Jeff McCulley
2023-12-31 04:27:21 +0000 UTCRereading this later after Zac’s conversation with Leandra. Yselio’s words “Between truth and Empire, what is more important?” Which is random to say imo unless the technocrat revealed something to undercut the right of their Imperial rule. Did the Nutzu reveal something about the time when Karz had his identity stolen and the System was awakened that undercut their believed self-righteous claim to rule? This is prob a complete stretch but Yselio’s comment plus the device in his head made me think something happened while Nutzu had him
Palmer Evans
2023-12-13 20:40:11 +0000 UTCNot being able to loot is a shame. Especially when he's got those two swords.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-30 17:45:06 +0000 UTCI think both Zac and the Imperials know, these fools don't have enough value to get a supremacy to resurrect them. The backlash is too much. Only Iz is close enough and cared for enough by a supremacy so far.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-30 17:44:09 +0000 UTCThis is unhinged and needlessly antagonistic. If I were TFD I'd ban you in two seconds
Dols1618
2023-11-29 19:58:04 +0000 UTCMaybe on the outside means outside as in not in the fortress's mystic realm. Tdf sometimes leaves room for debate.
Robert Gami
2023-11-29 19:57:26 +0000 UTCThat’s a fun thought. Yrial might’ve scammed his way into the family.
Telewyn
2023-11-29 19:56:47 +0000 UTCCan but won't. They have little attachment to their people. The backlash of a resurrection is supposed to be insane.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:56:39 +0000 UTCGalau hit the button, but he did it using Zac's token of authority. likely they'd both get points for that.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:53:12 +0000 UTCI think he will end up both powered up and behind enemy lines. Positioning him to have an even greater impact on the War. Helped destroy whatever equals the biggest curse energy target where they aimed the weapon. Probably destroy a key planet there. Then from behind enemy lines he destroys some realm where they are staging an army. Ultimately, I think he will end up first on the ladder and the system will grant him early access to Ultom.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:51:06 +0000 UTCFeels good to F5 again, its been too long.
Matt Spratte
2023-11-29 19:49:57 +0000 UTCConsider that the bulk of the fight was within the prince's domain. Maybe a bit of a time lag in his domain. I think there are a few other similar issues that could have extended the time as well. Like during the fight he used his bloodline like a weapon, which could have obsorbed energy that way as well. Just a few thoughts
FarStryder
2023-11-29 19:44:50 +0000 UTCAs much as I feel the same way, I am constantly looking for something to fill the gap and sadly, nothing else comes even close. And it's an easy fix really. All comes down to setting appropriate expectations for the reader. He just had a breakthrough on the dao throne so they could have just spent some time treasure hunting and it would have been awesome. Then had a random void treasure trigger his bloodline right before the fight. Then have the bloodline rip the core right out of his imperial gut (so that the bloodline evolution was relevant to the fight). Where they messed up was having false urgency. (Again setting up the reader with expectations and not meeting them.) Then rubbing in the false urgency over and over with distractions. Took away from the reunion and the big fight.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:39:57 +0000 UTCI don't doubt he was a flamebearer. Had to of been or they would have continued to send princelings and princesses till someone was accepted.
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 19:38:55 +0000 UTCGiven his personality, Yrial probably renamed himself after some great imperial genius with high cheekbones.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:36:04 +0000 UTCI somewhat agree with drawing things out. He just had a breakthrough on the dao throne so they could have just spent some time treasure hunting and it would have been awesome. Then had a random void treasure trigger his bloodline right before the fight. Then have the bloodline rip the core right out of his imperial gut. Where they messed up was having false urgency. Then rubbing in the false urgency over and over with distractions. Took away from the reunion and the big fight.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:33:46 +0000 UTCIn 964 Yselio says “With the Third Heaven already creating problems from the shadows and the Technocrat's Neural Network trying to sneak its way inside, we cannot abide another.” So guessing device was aiding their attempt to hack the system
2023-11-29 19:30:08 +0000 UTCCould have been a ship she sent over. Kruta is the best so I hope you're right. Additionally Zac has a lot of gimp demons and needs to get that limb regrowing bone technique from Kruta. That is an awesome idea!
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:29:16 +0000 UTCYeah, they confirmed that Arcaz passed Zac up in contribution points when he was campaigning with the undead.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:23:53 +0000 UTCAgreed. Usually TFD has a better sense of urgency where this time he just has false urgency and a million distractions. Wouldn't be to hard to fix either if he just slow rolled the bloodline stuff, he just had a big breakthrough with the Dao Throne, so the bloodline thing could have waited a while. Got us through some of these chapters and then have a void treasure that sets him off just before the fight. And instead of getting saved at the last minute, his bloodline evolution should have ripped the core right out of the guy.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:21:49 +0000 UTCSo you think Yselio had a Flamebearer seal? Huh...Thought he wanted to steal Zac's. Butt after Yrin's comments about having 4 other sealbearers it does come together and make sense.
Mike Naka
2023-11-29 19:16:51 +0000 UTCI think he will pop out with fancy new bloodline powers akin to a Super Saiyan transformation. Unfortunately he will be deep in the Kan Tanu heart curse territory and have to sneak around stealing opportunities which puts him in place to effect the war in a massive way and jump to the top of the ladder and the system will grant early access to Utom. Meanwhile Arcaz can chill with his Undead Empire buddies and they will not be able to blame him that he doesn't get the same early access as Zac.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:16:33 +0000 UTCUltom has certain hate associated with it's aura. The tainted water came from that dimension as well. According to Iz it's dead Dao.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-29 19:10:02 +0000 UTCHe absorbed the Flamebearer seal. As for the other parties. It should be the Kan'Tanu, the alliance and the Technocrats. The 4th party being the imperials.
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 18:57:07 +0000 UTCno cheating
Thenais
2023-11-29 18:42:50 +0000 UTCThey're basically there to ensure no one of their level kills their charge. It's why Iz was given a peak Autarch as her dao guardian, to ensure her utmost safety; and she'll likely keep such a guardian till she's at least an Autarch
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 18:38:29 +0000 UTCPlease, please Thousandflame Galley :) Altho no, there's no way it could possibly get into Zecia. It could be Iz and Kruta finally showing up tho.
mrthorwahl
2023-11-29 18:37:46 +0000 UTCNow this is the way explain why one feels the bloodline being withheld felt dragged on. Originally, zac said he could hold it back an Hour at most yet it felt like the sequence of events would take longer than an hour. Certainly they saved time with the seal carving out a good chunk to the towers top, but still felt off.
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 18:33:40 +0000 UTCsadly true
Indy
2023-11-29 18:32:54 +0000 UTCI agree! I really didn't like the fight with the prince, it was noted that his bloodline was consuming some of his skills when he activated them.... so how was Zac able to hold back the strongest person he ever fought? So the ship is being sent over enemy lines, (the strongest signal they could find if I remember correctly) how will Zac survive the blast??? while his in the ship awaking his bloodline? and isn't he supposed to be weak right after awakening?
Amani
2023-11-29 18:29:38 +0000 UTCProtection as you say, and the system intends for this challenge, ultom, to be for the younger generation so the young have been put in charge so they can get as much fate as possible with the courts. There are a few chapters where we hear about it, and the young reaver complaining about the elders trying to micromanage him despite him being put in charge for said reason.
Kharas
2023-11-29 18:26:35 +0000 UTCI could imagine that there are more factions involved than just the ones we have directly had detailed. Like some B-Grade level ones comparable to the Radiant Temple.
Henry Wartemberg
2023-11-29 18:20:00 +0000 UTCI really wanted Emily X average
Amani
2023-11-29 18:19:43 +0000 UTCThe characters and factions in any cultivation or progression novel always fall into substance abuse/obsession, it is a core feature of those stories, even if it isn't mentioned directly. Even when you get the "pure" meditating monk who won't use any treasures, pills, etc., they progress by being insanely focused and obsessed with moving forward. The ONLY people who don't fall onto that might be those "what will be, will be" style monks who progress based on luck and simply exploring the world/normal meditating. Even they are often obsessed with their path, it just doesn't show as much since they are so passive.
Brian Block
2023-11-29 18:18:20 +0000 UTCFYI, the Imperials has been used to refer to ANY of the Heavens, as they were Imperial Clans (Clans of the Limitless Empire). Yrial and the Seventh heaven are the "Imperials" that were in the last 10-20 chapters. The Parties should be something like Technocrats, Kan'Tanu, Alliance folks (Zac and Acheron Company, the folks he met outside the spatial storm who were "allies"), maybe some others (no one should really know the Muscle Brigade group was there, so I doubt they count). As to which were ousted and which were weakened, I am not sure, as it didn't seem like the Imperial teams and Yrial managed to fully kill any faction or force them out of the tower.
Brian Block
2023-11-29 18:14:57 +0000 UTCThen unsub for a bit and come back to binge or when the story arc has moved on. This has been TFD's writing and storytelling style for nearly 1200 chapters, only getting more like this as the possible storylines and side characters expand. I can't imagine it will change for the next 2-3k chapters that I feel he might have for this story.
Brian Block
2023-11-29 18:09:56 +0000 UTCAll these Dao guards are Monarchs. I guess I wonder why they cow tow so much to Hegemons- just b/c they're important? Kator and Tavza both had Dao guards. Do we know what purpose Dao guards have? Is it just to protect the younger generation?
Mike Naka
2023-11-29 18:07:44 +0000 UTCYlivin is the monarch and former dao guard of yselio. The one that take the seal is yrin, yselios brother and part of the younger generation Imperial from the 7th heaven. So many names starting with y is probably not the best for reading comprehension 😀. Ylivin the monarch is also called uncle by yselio at some point, so they are keeping it in the family.
Kharas
2023-11-29 17:56:04 +0000 UTCSkydiving- I love this arc, so much has happened. Idk why you are mad
Berry McCockiner
2023-11-29 17:48:06 +0000 UTCVery confusing. What rune did Yrin absorb from Yselio? Almost seems like something from the Ultom Courts from the revelation he seemed to receive. Butt I 'thought' Yrin was a Monarch so I've got no idea... As for the 3 groups, 1 is Technocrat, could the other 2 be the Havorak/Dvorak Empire and maybe the Starbeast Alliance? Thought Yselio's beastie would play more of a role than a chew toy for Verun... A lot of suspense around the cosmic vessel by Emily et all. TFD's lack of details is definitely causing a lot of speculation. It'd be cool if it was a Tayn ship, but it just may turn out to be the 'Y' Team's vessel. With all the loose ends, TFD sure has us coming back for more. Makes me wonder if the 'D' and 'T' stand for D!ck Tease! LOL On a side note...I wonder if I could get Chat GPT to read all these chapters and spit out some kind of Wiki where it would summarize all these alliances. Plus, it'd be nice to read all the Karz parts back to back w/o having to go back and search for them.
Mike Naka
2023-11-29 17:40:56 +0000 UTCI mean I kind of Expected it. It’ll be Either Friday first a new Zac perspective or Monday. Best guess we’re going to flesh out the last of what opportunities his Ultom Cycle will be getting. Who Catheya went off with etc
Henry Wartemberg
2023-11-29 16:21:09 +0000 UTCnormally TFD is better at setting up the end of the month cliff, this time the story flow suffered for it and i feel a bit schadenfreude about it XD. I know its stupid i payed for it and all that, but i cant help it.
Indy
2023-11-29 16:12:45 +0000 UTCI agree on most part, but I think problem is, that we can't get sense of timeframe. All of things that happened including the convo + activation of spear and add to that fight only took like 20 min? So original estimate was spot on, just changing few details in conversations and actions might improve everything
SandreX
2023-11-29 15:59:05 +0000 UTCMy only complaint with how this section played out is how much it was stressed that Zac could barely contain his outbreak, that he almost consumed Emily, etc. But the breakthrough was pushed back narratively so far that it detracted from the sense of urgency that was attempting to be maintained through 5 chapters. Then the fight with the imperial felt like a reverse deus ex machina, just to make sure something went wrong. Then the fight gets actually deus ex machina'd by the person who took the body away. Overall I feel like the sequence and set up of events needs revisiting in editing. Tone down Zac's struggle with holding back hos breakthrough at first, having it build to a point of breaking instead of having it almost be breaking the entire time
Jonas Lemke
2023-11-29 15:44:44 +0000 UTCWell the technocrats are definitely one of the outsiders, since a few died off they are one of the weakened ones. If you consider the Kan Tanu weakened by launching a decaying c-grade fortress at em and maybe the 1st Heaven (imperials) had probably one of their top contenders taken out of the inheritance early so they were ousted
Jonas Lemke
2023-11-29 15:26:46 +0000 UTCIt's highly unlikely, remember the battlefield at the foot of the tower had a bunch of seal bearers.
Darthnarciss
2023-11-29 15:22:45 +0000 UTCCultivation, man. It's like, ya know? Like you take these pills and the Universe speaks to you. Yeah, Cultivation rocks man.
Darthnarciss
2023-11-29 15:21:42 +0000 UTCThe 7th Heaven are a bunch of elitists. In their minds their version and vision of everything is right and the Truth. Hence "Empire is Truth". So since they are so perfect, and you can't improve on perfection, anything trying to add to them is wrong and an abomination. But, their possibly hypocritical, hope is considering the sheer age of Ultom, there is a chance that some hitherto forgotten part of their glorious past may be revealed to them, as well as the fact that the others don't deserve Ultom.
Darthnarciss
2023-11-29 15:20:08 +0000 UTCVery good point about average and galau. I think you are right about Emily, and I imagine Zacs contributions and monstrous luck will send the spill over merit his way 😀
Kharas
2023-11-29 14:53:49 +0000 UTCSince he already was foreshadowed this chapter. It's about time we get another Carl the Janitor chapter
Chemistrywarrior
2023-11-29 14:27:20 +0000 UTCAllegedly. But remember, there are things he has been unwilling to tell Zac and unwilling to facilitate any sort of connection with his family or himself if he is still alive.
Stephen Taylor
2023-11-29 14:23:07 +0000 UTCDo we know for sure that Arcaz and Zac get different contribution points? They are one person even though they show up on the ladders twice.
Stephen Taylor
2023-11-29 14:21:23 +0000 UTCIf he wanted to send that message he would have killed off core characters earlier in the series lol
Russell Widger
2023-11-29 14:20:17 +0000 UTCI have been wondering if Yrial is first dynasty, given the name starting with a Y
Stephen Taylor
2023-11-29 14:18:26 +0000 UTCI had this exact though a few books ago when Zac was in his cave in Earth after he just took some 'natural treasure'. The experience described sounded like he fell through a K-hole. I'm like, this man just trippin on cosmic shrooms lmao.
xlinkedx
2023-11-29 13:44:25 +0000 UTCGiven how many it took to get to the D grade and cutting that down by 100-200, given D grade zac is in a far better position than beginning E grade zac, adding in what he gains from winning ultom and I'll imagine we'll see 2500-3k or so chapters by the novels end. As for how long that'll take? No telling. Though I don't doubt we'll see a few month hiatus one day.
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 13:34:03 +0000 UTC🤔 Actually now you say it. He did basically take a needle as started Slamming. Skipped the veins and went straight for the Heart 😬. The First Tweaker
Henry Wartemberg
2023-11-29 13:24:43 +0000 UTCIt's unlikely, but hella good motivator for Zac to wipe out all Imperials (traitors)
SandreX
2023-11-29 11:13:06 +0000 UTCI'm guessing he felt that the "truth" of ultom would be more of a poison to the dynasty than a boon. Could be claiming ultom leads to only 2 paths, ruination or success, in where one leads to the fall of your dynasty while the other elevates it through the wars and hardships owning Ultom would bring.
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 11:11:44 +0000 UTCI imagine it's seals on the battlefronts, ambushes like what zac experienced before entering the fortress. No way TFD is killing off such core characters like Emily and average and galau..... unless TFD has been baiting us and will use this to show us not even core characters are safe😱
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 11:09:54 +0000 UTCI really hope that it's not Zac's guys -> "And despite your failure inside the fortress, we managed to seize four more seals on the outside" If you count the demon you get four seals. But really hope this is not true, because I'm pretty sure those without seals will be dead in that case
SandreX
2023-11-29 08:56:28 +0000 UTCYrin is first mentioned in chapter 964, where Yselio and Ylvin are first introduced. "I'm strong, but Yrin is stronger. I'm smart, but Yzum is smarter. And that's not even counting the scions of the Fourth and Sixth, who were both qualified to contend for the pillar. Yet the Heavens chose me. What does it come down to? Fate. For some reason, my fate with the Left Imperial Palace is the strongest, so I will listen to the whispers of fate for direction."
The First Defier
2023-11-29 08:40:25 +0000 UTCYeah all of them are pretty much tripping :d
SandreX
2023-11-29 08:10:00 +0000 UTCAnyone else ever realise how this multiverae is filled with a bunch of junkies? Just picking up magical herbs, pills, shrooms, taking stimulents (rageroot), etc and having enlightening or stimulated experiences?? Lol
C Smith
2023-11-29 06:58:49 +0000 UTCAny thoughts on who this is referring to? "You ousted one outside party and weakened two more. " Maybe the monks but I doubt it.
Jeffrey Worrall
2023-11-29 06:20:52 +0000 UTCGalau is going to get screwed on the credit side, just like Zac did on his void star shenanigans, remember 125k is the max amount of credit a person can accrue before registering. Galau, Average, and the rest of the gang haven't registered for the war. Emily will probably end up with significantly more credit's from this than Galau just because she isn't capped.
Jeffrey Worrall
2023-11-29 06:19:10 +0000 UTCI agree with you. I'd really like to see the improvements to Zac's bloodline but I doubt that will happen this week at the pace the story has been going.
D375
2023-11-29 05:47:02 +0000 UTCSo is it gonna be another week until we know what the bloodline upgrade looks like? Maybe you want to cut to Raklid or Yselio's 3rd cousin before getting back to the story?
Anomander Rake
2023-11-29 05:27:05 +0000 UTC@SDST You have a point. Burnout is very real and often fatal. As a matter of fact, some of favorite stories are on hiatus or have been on hiatus, unfortunately. The well simply runs dry. Sometimes I wonder if I'll ever see the end. Any guesses on what the o/u is for chapters remaining?
Tsunami
2023-11-29 05:21:33 +0000 UTCGo outside, touch grass and get a grip with reality. They release one chapter a day, obviously quite a few chapters will be filler. This is how stories work, every chapter can’t be about the main character, there has to be filler for world building. If you can’t handle that, maybe you should wait until the books release. Consuming books released by chapter by chapter isnt for every. And quite honestly you sound like you need some therapy if a book is pissing you off this much.
Chris
2023-11-29 05:12:36 +0000 UTCYou mean zac next fangirl ?
Thenais
2023-11-29 04:46:24 +0000 UTCA new ship appeared, and it’s Emily x Galau
Thenais
2023-11-29 04:41:28 +0000 UTCI hope Iz pops in for the win on this one. Two monster ships Duke it out while the kiddos have an epic battle on a crumbling planet.
Ty Cooper
2023-11-29 03:58:13 +0000 UTCNothing needed to be cut here per se but some things leading up to this could have been, or written in such a way it required less posts. This point would have already come and gone if it had. Or at least the bloodline thing. That Could have just been wrapped up already. Move on the the next thing to cliffhanger instead of this same damn thing. And thats not the only example. Stop being intentionally obtuse and wording your arguments as though nothing else could possible be done to help the situation. Doesn't matter you think it isn't being cliffhangered to death. It is, and far more so than it used to be, whether you agree or not and the consequences, too. I've said have I had to say here. Hopefully the writer gets it. If not, what happens, happens. There are other stories to read, as you pointed out in your own way. You can track trends like this you know, in an objective way beyond the scope of your opinion or mine. The number of complaints on THIS EXACT ISSUE are increasing. Go back and look if you want. That means more and more people express that view, meaning the cause is growing in frequency. Doesn't matter. Either he addresses or just does what you are doing and pretend it isn't happening.
2023-11-29 02:51:21 +0000 UTCCould possibly be the monks and Thea. They were tracking Zacs karma but that was before he had karma nullification
Michael
2023-11-29 02:51:06 +0000 UTCThe only objective reality here is that this story is going to take many more years to complete. You seem to think that it is being unnecessarily dragged out - I don't. What should TFD have cut? The ascent through the tower? The tribulation throne? Meeting up with Average and Co? The fight with Yselio? The breakthrough vision? This chapter with Emily having escaped and the new Seventh Heaven Prince being set up as one of Zac's next antagonists? I think any of these sections could have been actually been expanded upon to improve the story and further flesh out this arc, but we're here now and we'll see Zac's rewards tomorrow or later this week.
Chase C
2023-11-29 02:41:56 +0000 UTCIt's too early. He's not gonna do that before he upgrades his core. TFD is gonna save that for when he gets close to peak d grade. That's gonna be the equivalent of the Void Star arc. Where he goes to one last place to scoop up some benefits before heading to the special location for his upgrade. Or I'm just wrong and we'll find out by next week.
Darnell Maxwell
2023-11-29 02:32:18 +0000 UTCNah he ends up near the shit his mum wants him to do
Rushin Lad
2023-11-29 02:29:09 +0000 UTCDuel cultivating opposite daos is straight out of Yrial's wheelhouse. Notice anyone who recently did that?
Caelum
2023-11-29 02:26:24 +0000 UTCYou just rattled off a bunch of stuff that isn't relevant to what I am saying. It's not a question of scope but pacing and intentional disregard for our time in leeching as many posts out of a single concept it's absurd. And the only way this ties into the creative process is that the author, during creation of his posts, deliberately chose to drag crap out. Everything else can happen without 50 times too many cliffhangers. There is a right amount and then there is too much. I never said zero but certainly not so much it drags the story down like this. And again READERS LEAVING IS A BAD THING AND NOT A SOLUTION! If everyone who gets fed up with this leaves the story crumbles bit by bit as the author will move on if it sinks too far. That's not a good thing. There is no way you don't get that. Stop trying to defend an indefensible thing. The trend exists and it's stupidly too much. Reality doesn't really care if you hate it, it stays true anyway.
2023-11-29 02:17:22 +0000 UTCUh, these names, are they making anyone else cringe? Bubbur. Really? Yselio, Yrin, Ylvin? Oh, come on! Anyway, any ideas what "though Yrin frowned upon feeling a slight disturbance within. He wanted to destroy it and the seal before they could taint the dynasty's providence. But he couldn't." meant?
Tsunami
2023-11-29 02:03:58 +0000 UTCThe fact of the matter is that this form of content creation - releasing stories chapter by chapter every day - is going to leave readers wanting more, immediately, no matter how fast the story develops or how many cliff hangers there are. There are thousands of stories you could be reading that go much faster and have a much smaller scope, but if that were the case here you wouldn't be getting development into the characters from the Seventh Heaven, or Zac's expanding group of Seal Bearers, or visions explaining the events leading up to the creation of the system. TFD is trying to do something somewhat unique with the massive scope of this story, and there are plenty of us fully on board with it. I completely disagree that the trend of cliff hangers and drawing the story out is a bad thing here. I'm trying to explain that I think the effort put into the world building of this story is exactly what makes it so special.
Chase C
2023-11-29 01:53:53 +0000 UTCLex I did like those things but the terrible pacing had us getting them 50 cliffhangers too late. You KNOW the pacing was better before. It was. Yes the story was always, even in the beginning, a drawn out to a degree, but it was to the right degree. Where the wait was just enough to make the climax even more awesome. We passed that ages ago and now the "let's drag this shit out 50 times more than needed" meter has dived straight through red and into black to dark it might as well be swimming in the Abyssal Lake itself. Dragging crap out in NOT the one concept in a story we want to go Super Saiyan man. Dang.
2023-11-29 01:44:17 +0000 UTCAre you talking about what the alliance is giving out or what the system gives out? If the former, He might get some for the clues that allowed them to discover the Technocrats meddling, but it'll be a pittance compared to what zac gets for helping launch that spear. If it's the systems contribution points, it'll likely be zero. Ultimately, arcaz had no part other than helping top zacs energy while zac was the main participant.
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 01:41:57 +0000 UTCWell that second half was pure gibberish but LET'S GO EMILY!!! You were speaking straight facts though. Ogras is really the only schemer yall got in the upper echelon. And it's about time yall found someone to replace Jeeves. Emily for the win! Also Zac's fucking dead🤣. I know his mutilated body is still probably in the tower. That or we finally get to see if Arcaz can use creation energy to make Zac a new body on Ensolus. But Yselio fucked him up! Imagine if Zac escapes the tower before it goes boom. Only for him to need to fight through planets of Kantanu as he looks for a teleporter that can bring him back.
Darnell Maxwell
2023-11-29 01:39:50 +0000 UTCYou mean the Supremacy named Thousand flame? With a gargantuan ship powered by 3 heavenly territories? The ship that's had over a thousand autarchs thrown into its inferno? Yeah I highly doubt the system would allow that past the barrier but maybe a lesser version entered with Iz and kruta; would be cool seeing her arrive much earlier than expected and even saving zacs allies at that.
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 01:38:03 +0000 UTCChase you get that isn't good right? All you did there is establish the long trend of a bad thing. If thay floats your boat okay but most of us I bet are getting tired of it. To varying amounts that will only grow if it continues. Stuff like this is how these things eventually collapse. Yeah this story is awesome in those other ways but all the terrible extra, extra, extra, extra cliffhangers on the same damn topic ruins all that. Cliffhanger different things, not the same thing 50 times. My goodness burn me at the stake if you must but damn it's true. This trend, like gravity, exists rather you agree with it or not. It doesn't care and remains real anyway. Having to leave because that's the only option the author gives you IS NOT A GOOD THING. Too many people doing that and story folds. You know that, regardless of how defensive you feel.
2023-11-29 01:37:51 +0000 UTCSo you didn't like this chapter? You didn't like Emily and Co. having a conversation like people and her deciding to aquire a much needed asset like galau? You didn't like seeing Yselio and his brother and Dao guardians moments together? Showing us why Yselio is to be relieved of his duties and why a whole new face will be taking over? What about Mondays chapter? Did you like reading about karz and laondio doing fuck all? I sure did because it was a big info dump. If you don't like it, it is what it is but don't bitch and complain about the pacing and still pay for it, because this will most certainly go on till this weeks end, even just finding out what the Technocrats want could take up the next 2 chapters. Besides, the biggest lure of the fortress was the treasures, so obviously, it'll be drawn out with the looting, especially when learning new things like what zac gained from the Throne. As for the cliff hangers, if you haven't gotten used to that by now, mind as well just pack and leave because 1,158 chs in and I doubt they'll go away.
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 01:35:23 +0000 UTCI'll be "hey he said something about this story I read that I don't like so out of loyalty to the author I am going to get defensive and hate him even if I secretly agree" guy. I don't care, I am not the author so hating me won't make the story better or worse. It on the off chance the memo gets through and it has a positive effect, it is worth it. Be loyal the author, that's actually honorable. Why can't he do the same with us and have a little more respect for our damn time.
2023-11-29 01:28:51 +0000 UTCYou're out of your mind here, man. This whole arc has been so much faster than the last several it's almost disappointing. This "drawn out stuff" is the whole reason that this story is so good. There's almost no one else on the entire internet producing such an insanely in-depth and large scale creative work right now, and the only reason the payoff is so good at the end is because of the path we took to get there. I actually can't believe that someone is complaining about having to wait for what will end up being a couple weeks or less to get to a major breakthrough when Zac entered this hidden realm less than 25 chapters ago. Were you here for the Twilight Ocean or Orom World? How about arguing in the comment section about whether or not Zac would form his core by chapter 1000 when it ended up taking until 1060, nearly three months later, before he actually got around to it. If you think this arc is too drawn out, you should just unsubscribe and read it in larger chunks or stop following the story all together, because this is what it's all about.
Chase C
2023-11-29 01:25:37 +0000 UTCThe trend of drawing out the story like this is not fun. The story itself is still fun but extended cliffhangers for such a long time aren't. Makes me want to unsub
The Tallest Tree
2023-11-29 01:21:27 +0000 UTCBerry, yeah, you right. Leave. Because the author has gotten so damn bad with this crap and listens to the people who make his story matter as all, us, so little that leaving is the only recourse you have. Thats not a good thing. And you don't like it being dragged out either. You lying if you say otherwise.
2023-11-29 01:20:00 +0000 UTCI like it being drawn out, nothing worse than a story being rushed and skipping background and ignoring the other characters in the world. The complexity and detail of this story is why it is easily my favorite. Keep it up!
Baynir
2023-11-29 01:19:01 +0000 UTCI am in favor of that outcome. Somehow, Iz brought an entire dreadnought into the zecia sector because her aunt, thousand flame demanded a spectacle, though maybe its another item dredged from the limitless empires history awaiting a new owner. 🤔 No telling what and I highly doubt we'll see an answer this week
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 01:15:07 +0000 UTCCan't be. She was a supremacy and that was an A-grade ship. No way either would be let into Zecia. Plus, it isn't on fire
Michael Fannon
2023-11-29 01:14:27 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2023-11-29 01:14:24 +0000 UTCIt isn't on fire. Seems like anything related to Iz should be on fire.
Michael Fannon
2023-11-29 01:12:35 +0000 UTCThe biggest question is if that's even possible. Can they transfer a soul into an Artificial one? And would Yselio even be willing to do that? And even it if was possible, the requirements would likely be rather stringent and, at least at their level and limited means, very time consuming. Even with his death approaching, from the Little we know of him It feels way to outta character; besides, his soul was being consumed by the killing intent and it seems not even the monarchs could stop it so I doubt the Technocrats could
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 01:12:10 +0000 UTCDranek19 I know right? I usually don't go this far but damn the saying it super nice thing obviously isn't working. Trying a different approach, even if it it's heavier handed than I would prefer, because I want it work. I care about the premise of the story enougg to want to save it from going in the same direction of other Xanxia/Litrpg stories. I want at least one of these stay good. This one can be. If the author needs more time to right quality posts or bank up chapters, that's way better than this. We know the author can because he already has. The story started that way. We all know it. Can we please go back to that pacing. It was far better than this.
2023-11-29 01:11:07 +0000 UTCI'm guessing the Primordial star beast just showed up.
Michael Fannon
2023-11-29 01:10:47 +0000 UTCYour comment dragged on longer than my first beating by my stepdad FFS. If you don’t like it, leave
Berry McCockiner
2023-11-29 01:10:08 +0000 UTC4 cliffs. Still haven't resolved Friday's and yesterday's cliffs.
Michael Fannon
2023-11-29 01:09:17 +0000 UTCI dunno, hasn't felt drawn out to me. Zac entered the fortress, acquired incredible gains from his soul cores being fully ready to start advancing his cultivation to his body tempering art being right at the threshold of breaking through to the 4th layer to his new void path and now awakening bloodline. Add in the few treasures zac gained before his feast and the gains were simply absurd; tac on a spear literally trained on the strongest kan'Tanu monarch in the zecia sector and it's a major win
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 01:06:19 +0000 UTCBro, Thea and zac haven't been together for more than a decade and he thinks she's dead. Their relationship ends with a ! Not a ?. As for Thea and the Sangha, we likely won't see them relevant for a while; I'm willing to bet it'll be around the mid way point of readying for ultom before they officially appear.
Lex Luther S
2023-11-29 01:01:36 +0000 UTCBro is being pretty critical but he has a point it feels like we get 3 chapters of fluff then 2 amazing moments then back to the fluff for a little bit. That being said I’m still consuming the content like Zac’s drawn out d grade bloodline evolution
Dranek19
2023-11-29 01:01:25 +0000 UTC0 chance that Yrial has anything to do with these guys. He was a wandering cultivator that had no connection to any of the Heavens, progressed almost entirely on his own, and stalled out at late Monarchy.
Chase C
2023-11-29 00:59:47 +0000 UTCNope zero chill over blatant repetitive disregard for the time of the people that make this matter. Hella other comments about it too only they are ignored because they say it too nicely. You've gotten so used to reading all this drawn out stuff you can't even see how bad it's gotten. Jeeze dude how many chapter does it take to wrap up a single damn concept. He's leeching as much out of it as he can at the expense of the audience's time. It used to not be like this at all and now every damn arc is just a string of subplots needlessly drawn out as though they were primary plots in their own damn novels. It's gotten stupidly bad. You can't say it hasn't either. Go back and look at virtually every freaking chapter's comments man. People are saying in every damn chapter. Used to be only every so many. The trend it obvious. I'm just saying what those people are thinking too. Just without using inuedo or candy coating it. It's called concept fatigue. A bit of suspense makes the thing you are waiting to see a bit more impact full but this much makes it to where the final reveal is just meh. At this point there is no damn way the bloodline reveal will be so awesome it was worth all that and you just keep getting to expect more of it forever because the signs thus far show it only accelerating. Think what you want, this crappy trend exists either way. It isn't necessary to ruin a awesome thing with garbage like this. The relevant content in the last FIVE chapters could have been condensed to ONE perhaps two, which they would have been the way the author wrote this in the beginning. He doesn't have to let his story get crappy by letting stuff like this creep in. Just let it stay good, damn... At some point you have to, no matter what, start caring about what the audience thinks or this happens.
2023-11-29 00:58:17 +0000 UTCI think what they mean is that they believe the dreadnought that suddenly appeared is the Buddhist ship with Thea on it. Which I personally disagree with. I’m pretty sure that Buddhist spaceships would be just as obvious about what they are as everything else the sangha touches, covered in Sutras, and statues and emitting enough Dao to feel it all the way across the sector. I think it’s much more likely that it’s the ship with Zack’s troll friend on it
Aaron Schwartz
2023-11-29 00:57:57 +0000 UTCI think Yrial is probably their father and will make for an interesting reunion eventually.
Caelum
2023-11-29 00:53:34 +0000 UTCDude if you don't like it just stop funding. Don't lose your complete absolute mind on a writer doing his thing. You will never fully agree with a story 100%. Aka take a chill pill
pizzadahuttt
2023-11-29 00:34:49 +0000 UTCDoes Arcaz also get war merit credit? He was refueling Zac and he clued Zecia to the technocrat infiltration..
Salvo
2023-11-29 00:13:02 +0000 UTCI really think the dreadnaught is the fire Monarch who has Kruta
Jay Fowler
2023-11-28 23:56:46 +0000 UTCWorse... you didn't even get to loot the guy!
Salvo
2023-11-28 23:53:51 +0000 UTCIs Zac’s inheritance master, Yrial, definitely dead? All these Y names are making me suspicious. I like drawing things out. If anything, we should have spent longer in the tower. Checked in on Zac’s follower he left behind. Let Emily shine some more.
Telewyn
2023-11-28 23:53:36 +0000 UTCOmfg this is being drawn out way to damn much. One more fucking chapter of purposely dragging this shit out and I am so gone. I am not going to continue paying for these advance chapters when they only amount of drawn out bullshit. Dude stop fucking dragging this out or people will straight up abandon your ass and your absurdly drawn out story. Read your damn comment dude. How many readers need to VERY BLATANTLY AND IN STUPIDLY OBVIOUS AND CLEAR LANGUAGE NEED TO WARN YOU THAT YOU ARE DRAGGING THIS CRAP OUT TOO MUCH WITH THESE UNNEEDED AND UNWANTED CLIFFHANGERS BEFORE YOU REALIZE ITS FUCKING STUPID AND YOU STOP??? Like damn is that clear enough?? Read your comments dude. God damn you aren't going to have anyone left if you keep this crap up. It's not worth reading the good when it's bogged down with so much drawn out crap. Go ask thr authors of PrimL Hunter and Azaranth Healer if you don't think people will straight up bounce. Ypu know damn well what you are doing. Fucking stop it and write the damn story the way it was before you started this drawn out crap. You are paid too damn much to have this little regard for the people who support this story. Amateurs do this crap dude. Damn what the fuck does it take, everyone leaving, before you get the dzmn memo. For fuck sake I am not wasting any more time on this if it's just going to be more crao that feels like endless filler. This shit is like watching Boruto the anime. Find OTHER shit to do your cliffhanger crap with. You tired the bloodline shit to death. How many fucking chapters do you think you can get out one fucking concept???? For fuck sake wake up.
2023-11-28 23:12:11 +0000 UTCIm sure both Galau and Average get their fair share, but Zac did stand in the way of that Imperial prince, and without him doing that, Galau would never have gotten the chance to fire the spear. But as we saw from the shenanigans in the void star, when a group of people do something big, there is plenty of merit to go around. The plan to remove the Kan`tanu from the void star, or at least the technical aspects of it, were not Zacs plan him being a meathead and all. But without him both taking and giving a beating, the others plan would never have worked.
Kharas
2023-11-28 22:51:52 +0000 UTCThat doesn't have anything to do with Zac's bloodline awakening subplot.
D375
2023-11-28 22:26:30 +0000 UTCThe Sangha is using her and Everlasting Peace to find Zac.
Dalton Service
2023-11-28 22:23:16 +0000 UTCI don't follow. Thea Marshall hasn't been involved in this subplot at all.
D375
2023-11-28 22:02:28 +0000 UTCI like the idea of this being Iz with Kruta in tow.
darkkingrayley
2023-11-28 21:47:23 +0000 UTCThe depressing thought is even if you manage to kill a Prince in the wild by some chance, they would just respawn and kill you anyways… then your entire family for having the temerity 😢
Minh Nguyen
2023-11-28 21:46:04 +0000 UTCIsn't Galau is gonna get the credit? It was his idea. He hit the button.
darkkingrayley
2023-11-28 21:45:36 +0000 UTCThat was my first thought too!!!
Minh Nguyen
2023-11-28 21:36:55 +0000 UTCSo Im thinking Yselio probably uploaded himself to the Technocrat Soul Realm. His body was called back with only a piece of his soul because he knew his brother would be on the other side of his escape method. Lol why kill when you can convert.
Minh Nguyen
2023-11-28 21:36:29 +0000 UTCStill gotta tie in Zac’s ex(?)girlfriend who’s hanging out with the Sangha.
Telewyn
2023-11-28 21:31:29 +0000 UTCWhat's the over/under that Zac's bloodline awakening subplot won't be resolved until next month? The past two weeks have felt needlessly drawn out.
D375
2023-11-28 21:26:07 +0000 UTCCoalition of reason lmao. I wonder who are the member beside Carl and Emily
2023-11-28 21:23:30 +0000 UTCI think its a matter about people that survive and enter UItom being "fated" in the eyes of the big factions like Iz and the Imperials, and the truth being the impartment from Ultom. It was fx that "truth" that Zac used to perfect his Cosmic core blueprint.
Kharas
2023-11-28 21:10:08 +0000 UTC“Besides, the ancestors wouldn't have awoken one of the four remaining Primordials if they weren't confident she'd be able to participate." "Even if it turns out she can't enter, she'll still be the leader of our operations here," two quotes from chapter 1019
jazz
2023-11-28 21:05:30 +0000 UTCIs the implication that Zach sucked all the truths out of the opportunity for the new prince? What did you see “truth” … that Zack is fated and you are not.
Crown Red
2023-11-28 21:03:36 +0000 UTCShe’s not supremacy level and is outside the system. And she’s riding around with til sari from the starbeast alliance who is d grade. Chapter 1104
jazz
2023-11-28 21:00:52 +0000 UTCNah you are right they roll with ships, half of the chapter about them was complaining about tin cans :d
SandreX
2023-11-28 21:00:30 +0000 UTCThat would be useful, I always liked the dramatis personae section on the malazan books
2023-11-28 20:58:28 +0000 UTCThere is no way the System would let a Supremacy with an A-Grade battleship through the Zecia seal.
Hartmann
2023-11-28 20:53:20 +0000 UTCI’m guessing it’s the lady who has our barbarian friend from perennial vastness. Galau being gathered up tells me it’s time to get the crew together, narratively.
Observer Whimsy
2023-11-28 20:51:34 +0000 UTCI couldn’t sworn when we were first introduced to her( I think) they were rolling around in a cosmic vessel. Am I tripping?
jazz
2023-11-28 20:42:32 +0000 UTCVessel is probably alliance backup, author is messing with us a bit :d
SandreX
2023-11-28 20:39:54 +0000 UTCBesides aren't the Outsiders blocked from bringing powerful weapons?
Hartmann
2023-11-28 20:33:14 +0000 UTCThe Starbeast Alliance detests Cosmic Vessels so it is unlikely to be them. Maybe the Havarok Dynasty or their backers considering they are in an army under the command of the Dravorak?
Hartmann
2023-11-28 20:29:45 +0000 UTCAhh yes, the Thousand flames woman. Possibly but that'd mean they were thrown outside of the zecia sector and its seal for that to be possible; otherwise there's no way her ship powered by three heavenly territories would be able to enter zecia.
Lex Luther S
2023-11-28 20:29:36 +0000 UTCZac's actions in the fortress could give them enough Faction Merit for a World Upgrade
Hartmann
2023-11-28 20:27:17 +0000 UTCGotta be right? Iz would show up in a flaming something. And the alliance and kan whatever don’t give off that vibe
jazz
2023-11-28 20:21:29 +0000 UTCYea, he is testing our Dao hearts
Stefan Muntean
2023-11-28 20:19:07 +0000 UTCYrin, the new imperial prince, noticed that his brother failed at seizing fate, aka killing Zac and seizing his fate, and used some method to collect his body using imperial Qi and the empire’s providence, but Ysilio was severely wounded and almost dying and he being a “good” imperial brother just finished him off and took his seal.
Victor
2023-11-28 20:19:00 +0000 UTCYeah I think there's a solid chance that's what it is
Lucas Gulick
2023-11-28 20:18:53 +0000 UTCEven when we get a Zac chap we probably won't get to see his benefits immediately lol
Lucas Gulick
2023-11-28 20:18:07 +0000 UTC"rubs hands together in greed" And the Undead Empire is gotta threw an absolute hissyfit about human zac being ahead of Draug zac in the ladder.
Kharas
2023-11-28 20:18:06 +0000 UTCOh man I bet it's the relative of Iz with the crazy rep. Emily might be getting a transformative event like the guy Zac met in PV
Lucas Gulick
2023-11-28 20:17:28 +0000 UTCTftc!
brennon Petersen
2023-11-28 20:16:25 +0000 UTCHe must be approaching the earthly Dao of Cliff
Lucas Gulick
2023-11-28 20:16:13 +0000 UTC@xlinkedy the dam Seven Heaven is cheating right and left but the real and false heaven have no eyes:(( I hope Zack rips them apart permanently in time!
Stefan Muntean
2023-11-28 20:16:04 +0000 UTCYeah it was implied that average was dead, but then he had a surprise reveal. Average will probably only be around for a couple chapters before returning to his family but we should see him again in Ultom at least
Lucas Gulick
2023-11-28 20:15:44 +0000 UTCMore likely he will be spot 1 at the early hegemon ladder. Since just the people inside those empire know how much the ppl have. It will be unknown. But gonna be funny when he ranks up to middle hegemon and automatically become 1st again. Also all those hyper expensive goodies in the contribution story become available :)
Chemistrywarrior
2023-11-28 20:14:19 +0000 UTCYeah it seemed like the door to resurrection is still open even with the soul being broken apart
Lucas Gulick
2023-11-28 20:13:22 +0000 UTCWouldn’t that dreadnaught be the primordial monster lady?
jazz
2023-11-28 20:00:56 +0000 UTCYeah that was my impression as well. Like maybe he can still be res'd but not without penalties? It's hard to keep track of all the rules in this universe
Will Banning
2023-11-28 20:00:05 +0000 UTCNah Yselio already said. He doesn’t play nice like that. He’s kept it to himself. Problem is if he is resurrected after Ultom, he has walked away with prize knowledge he can use later in the story
Henry Wartemberg
2023-11-28 19:59:50 +0000 UTCYselio body snatcher?
ItWasIDIO!!
2023-11-28 19:59:28 +0000 UTCPretty sure all were new & only talked about when Yselio was introduced
ItWasIDIO!!
2023-11-28 19:58:59 +0000 UTCHe showed up a few lines later on that chapter. Hiding under def a really good camouflage array
Henry Wartemberg
2023-11-28 19:58:02 +0000 UTCYes they are new. Yselio- Seventh Heaven Prince that just stomped Zac. Yrin is new. appears to be his brother that seemingly told to watch (fate/ success) of the mission through their means. Ylvin his Monarch attendant (suggests they are already in zecia and hiding) Bro summons Yselio, seemingly senses he’s about to die and therefore fail. Takes the seal for to continue the mission for the family. Will report successes to Daddy to see if he will resurrect Yselio after Ultom is finished so it doesn’t mess with fate of the mission
Henry Wartemberg
2023-11-28 19:57:03 +0000 UTCWas that a technocrat ship?
BLead
2023-11-28 19:54:17 +0000 UTCBased on the other brother’s reaction, I think he’s now perma-dead. His bro wiped out his soul after that Truth comment, when the original plan looked to be to preserve it
Ormond S
2023-11-28 19:54:16 +0000 UTCVery interesting chapter. Now we just need to figure out how far Zac pushed his bloodline and what he got from doing it, how much/how many Kan´tanu the Centurion spear kills and, ohh yes... How the sector reacts when Zac get his share of the war merit for being central to the damage a Limitless empire superweapon do to the Kan´tanu big shots. "Say what is this middle hegemon doing on the monarch contribution ladder for the war??"
Kharas
2023-11-28 19:53:24 +0000 UTCI'm starting to get vertigo at this point from how long I've been looking down from Zac's breakthrough cliff.
xlinkedx
2023-11-28 19:51:41 +0000 UTCThe Seventh Heaven summoned Yselio out of wherever the Technocrats were holding him. His brother was chosen to replace him as the new Seal bearer after his failure. He killed him extra hard after his truth comment out of fear of what it would mean, but it’s implied that information was passed on through the seal anyway.
Ormond S
2023-11-28 19:51:04 +0000 UTCHe was hiding, because of his wounds
Jason Hatter
2023-11-28 19:50:52 +0000 UTCYselio? Well apparently their father is just God and can cast a Jesus spell on him to resurrect him. It's been hinted at a few times.
xlinkedx
2023-11-28 19:49:49 +0000 UTCThat was immediately followed by the reveal that Average was hiding behind a powerful stealth array with the wounded survivors of the Brigade.
Ormond S
2023-11-28 19:48:48 +0000 UTCHe was summoned or portaled in because his fate was was no longer deemed successful (about to die) but he hasn't died yet. His cousin says that the elders could potentially bring him back to life down the road based on his deeds. Killing him let's you get the enlightenment opportunity... whereas if the other energies kill him he would only get the opportunity if he was fated for it. He sliced him in half to ensure he'd get it.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-28 19:48:27 +0000 UTCWhile it's true Zac was disappointed not to see him at first, Average was there in a camouflage array hiding with the wounded and Zac was surprised he hadn't sensed it.
R. Maxwell Steele
2023-11-28 19:41:47 +0000 UTCAverage is literally in this chapter talking lol
Charles handgis
2023-11-28 19:39:29 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2023-11-28 19:39:03 +0000 UTCOh really? I must have missed when he was introduced.
some guy
2023-11-28 19:35:53 +0000 UTCBubbur is much more fun then Galau
Stefan Muntean
2023-11-28 19:35:48 +0000 UTCThat’s a really good question. If the system was being fair he’d get at least a portion of it imo
ForTheAfro
2023-11-28 19:35:26 +0000 UTCYselio got brought back to life but was still on a timer as the killing intent was eating his soul. He tries to leverage his information to get more help and was killed on the spot for his seal.
Neneera
2023-11-28 19:34:11 +0000 UTCFew possibilities, one it's undeads, Kator or hopefully Tavza. It's beasts which means pretty much they are as good as dead. Or my personal favorite Iz. Well Ogras is also a possibility, but doubt
SandreX
2023-11-28 19:33:14 +0000 UTCZac thought that he was dead, but he was simply hiding from him.
SandreX
2023-11-28 19:29:47 +0000 UTCInteresting. Didn't think Yselio would be done and dusted so quickly. Seems that killing intent and sneak attack was just to much to bear for him. You'd need a constitution on zacs level to come back from those wounds; on the bright side, at least this means zacs secrets are safe for the time being. As for what that dreadnought was, though worrisome, hopefully it's part of the alliances or maybe Iz arrived early and went to fetch zac only to just miss him. Boy ohh boy I can't wait for tomorrow's ch; gonna be lit seeing what's become of zac and maybe? The fallout of the spear being launched. And good on Emily poaching some much needed manpower, galau and surprisingly below 90 Bubbur🤣🤣
Lex Luther S
2023-11-28 19:29:18 +0000 UTCIt was clearly said that average wasn't with them and Zac even claimed to be a bit upset that he didn't make it
some guy
2023-11-28 19:28:49 +0000 UTCOMG! TFD manage to leave 2 cliffs in one chapter God dam his game is above believe!
Stefan Muntean
2023-11-28 19:28:05 +0000 UTCDead for now, but maybe their supremacy father with resurrect him after Ultom
Michael
2023-11-28 19:25:30 +0000 UTCNo he’s alive, he was with the others in the tower
Michael
2023-11-28 19:24:25 +0000 UTCWhat? Thats the last we see of him? I refuse to believe!
Henry Wartemberg
2023-11-28 19:24:16 +0000 UTCSo isn't average dead? It was heavily insinuated in the previous chapters but his name keeps on being brought up and he even has his own dialogues when he's supposed to be dead?
some guy
2023-11-28 19:21:17 +0000 UTCSo what just happened? I'm always left confused when the narrative switches to these imperial guys.
Samatar
2023-11-28 19:18:45 +0000 UTCNooooooooooo it’s so good as always but I really wanted to see what new goodies Zac would get
Ryan
2023-11-28 19:17:35 +0000 UTCVery good chapter! Lots of hints of things to come. Am wondering how these 7th heaven brothers got information about Zac and if that info was passed to these new guys. I am a little confused tho. Is Yselio dead dead or just dead for now? It's hard to tell anymore
Will Banning
2023-11-28 19:15:02 +0000 UTCMan, I need a chart with names and a simple description to remember all these people. Like I think the later half of the chapter all those people were new except the one guy but honestly I couldn't be sure
trufflezz
2023-11-28 19:14:58 +0000 UTCDoes zac get the kill energy?
Surgebinder
2023-11-28 19:11:33 +0000 UTCFourth!
Lucas Gulick
2023-11-28 18:59:30 +0000 UTCThanks
Sl0th
2023-11-28 18:59:13 +0000 UTCGg
Bryandbc01
2023-11-28 18:59:06 +0000 UTCFirst
Salvo
2023-11-28 18:58:27 +0000 UTC