Expecting release on Christmas
Added 2017-12-04 01:53:57 +0000 UTCHi guys, This is important for you to know. I planned to release the game on this week, but due to my computer hardware issues i couldn't work on digital drawings. In the meantime i work on manual drawings. So i have to postpone the release to Christmas. Don't lose hope. I will present you "BOOK 5" as a Christmas gift. P.S. i tried to post this some hours before ,but something went wrong. It is normal to face barriers when going forward right ;) Thanks, MUPLUR
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Sure :) Thank you for the review. I will keep level up :)
MUPLUR
2018-01-03 03:45:29 +0000 UTCYeah this version is vastly improved compared to the previous version. A few spelling mistakes still like. "Yeah! The people of republic city loves me!" it should be "love" me. You forget to add full stop's and question mark's etc at the end of sentences. Keep at it. I have my own game so feel free to give a earlier version a try sometime.
Henshinvolt
2018-01-03 03:06:40 +0000 UTCHi, v0.2 is out. Lot of improvements as you suggested. Don't forget to check it out :)
MUPLUR
2018-01-02 16:03:18 +0000 UTCThanks for playing my game. English is my second language, that's why you are experienced the bad english. The characterization of Tenzin is for story i have in mind. I will try my level best on english, in my next update. Stay tuned. Thank you :)
MUPLUR
2017-12-16 15:34:58 +0000 UTCI played through the 0.1 Version. This will be a critique of the game. The first thing I noticed is several incorrect spelling for words, some bad english or english that a native speaker would not use. You put some lines in there that say stuff like "Yes, now we are in Airtemple Island" why would he say "now"? The characterisation of Tenzin seems quite out of character. Talking about the good points of the game I think that your strong suit are the backgrounds and tenzin and the main character portrait drawings. I think the Korra and Lin need to be redrawn. The thing you need to improve on the most when it comes to the girl drawings in that version of the game is the faces.
Henshinvolt
2017-12-12 17:24:03 +0000 UTC
