Father Krampus
Added 2019-12-23 20:36:38 +0000 UTCMerry Christmas and Merry Krampus to all!
The legends of Saint Nick go back ages, but there is an even older, darker spirit that is much older... A spirit sent to ensure that the naughty children get their just fate, and that those walking the line make wise choices.
After nearly dying in a snow storm, a father of two comes face to face with the Krampus and is reminded of his past debts. The time is coming to pay up, and it'll take the entire family to cover the cost of the Krampus' miracles. Will Brandt's sons embrace him in a wholly unnatural and supernatural way if it means they get to continue on being a family?
Comments
Thanks for the feedback, not to mention everything else!!! You're such a good patron and a good friend.
Leo Todrius
2019-12-25 05:14:10 +0000 UTCSome really good MC content here, which isn't surprising given the family love theme, but this was pretty well nuanced, especially the scene between Brandt and Deke. Love the way you left it open for more... potential family business work in future stories.
Thu'Gan
2019-12-24 18:31:11 +0000 UTC
