OrKCupid
Added 2022-02-07 20:11:58 +0000 UTCSometimes it takes self reflection to motivate change. Sometimes it takes a holiday to polarize one's drives. Liam is tired of spending Valentine's Day alone and so he hastily downloads an app, not realizing the he downloaded a slightly different one than usual. Soon he's getting positive feedback from the orcs on OrKCupid and his reality is twisting little by little. Will he find love? Will he find lust? Will he find a partner in time for Valentine's Day?
Comments
It is a good story, I want to stress that, just an alternative route :D Also does not need to be inherently "short" as you could have multiple orcs suggesting alterations for liam all at the same time one after another. sort of a "love those tusks coming in." "thanks, uh, you have such nice green skin" "not as green as yours think of the contrast" etc. That wouldnt fit your intent for the story about how he grows more confident or leans into the positive aspects of the change. Slow and protracted tfs are hard. I should know I've tried to write a few.
Piper Malone
2022-02-08 00:05:07 +0000 UTCYour critique makes sense. Short/slow/protracted transformations are still tough for me, that does seem like the natural extension. Glad you liked it mostly.
Leo Todrius
2022-02-08 00:00:10 +0000 UTCI enjoy orc tf in general and this one was really fun. I like how you described his emotional and psychological changes even as he alters. Some really good ideas here. Though I would have like to have seen more of the orc comments and suggestions for Liam on ways he could look. More of a directed tf from the other users. Still this was a good story and a good time :D Hope to see a sequel some day. Maybe someone loads up a pic of him and some buddies at a lodge saying "Hanging with my bros" and the orcs get lewd as the guys get tusky hahaha
Piper Malone
2022-02-07 23:12:51 +0000 UTCLoved the story!! Very fun idea to mimic a dating app into a transformative one! Now if only such an app would be findable on the app store!
B
2022-02-07 21:52:48 +0000 UTCOhhh I’m sure gonna read that once I’m done at work!
B
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