Tier 1: Nero gets a Gotham Ride
Added 2024-05-01 19:21:23 +0000 UTCWhen Nero is out hunting Demons, the BatCycle materializes in front of him. When Red Hood and Nightwing descend upon his position, he barters his way for a ride on the bike.... but this is a ride with a difference!
Comments
I loved the lighting in this and the basic concept. But Like the cal one suffered from too many ideas. The first 5 images were great and I liked the alternate angle on one of them. It felt like it flowed smooth, but then the last 3 images were like bam bam bam and didn't flow as well. But then it was like quick DP shot followed by Nero getting jerked followed by the one and I thought it didn't work. I feel like it would have been better to stick with the theme of the first few images. Like The last image was fine, but I think having a wide shot would have been good to see the other 2. I think with 8 images you should have the set up, then have 1 or 2 positions (like starting with a BJ or hand job kind of thing for like .5 position lol) I think having 2 or 3 is just too much and it's always the last couple images that don't flow smooth because it's just a rapid fire of positions. The last 3 images weren't very satisfying and kind of anticlimactic to an otherwise good set. I feel like I see that in a lot of sets that there will be a natural flow and then the last 3 image will be a rapid fire of 3 completely different positions and I that doesn't work for 8 images. And it takes away. Like I think instead of the DP shot do image 7 bit have it be Jason jerking Nero off since it flows then with image 5, then have a wide shot of the two humming on Neros face before ending it like you did. That way the flow is better. The extra positions detracted not added from the set. I want too see this pairing again. Also why does Jason have the ugliest mask out of all the Gotham knights lol. I've never seen a good version of his mask in any medium lol poor Jason.
Derink Derink
2024-05-02 02:49:47 +0000 UTCβΊοΈ
DanteJackal
2024-05-01 22:43:26 +0000 UTCwhat a ride π love the threesome combo... very well done set :)
Chris Blaue (Talisin)
2024-05-01 21:43:51 +0000 UTC
