Half Truths
Added 2017-11-20 03:27:47 +0000 UTCThe story! Tell me your thoughts on this format. Do you prefer having the story as an image comment (basically where I'm putting this text), or would you like an image file as well? Both? Separate?
Edit: Thank you for your inputs! I changed the font from my handwriting to, you know, something readably standard (Georgia font). I also edited some passages so there's less use of the same descriptor (I have a bad habit of that), as well as clarifying some other-wise misleading sentences.
The story has been posted as text on the stand-alone image post.
So the consensus is... to do both! So I'll do both from now on.
Comments
I'll keep that in mind, it's something to explore for sure.
PWCSponson
2017-11-20 20:44:58 +0000 UTCHm, I re-read the passage I wrote and I think the wording made it come off as though the muscle strengthening was an active event. I changed it to better indicate that the virus had already strengthened her body - so she couldn't use the change as a "real" excuse (even though it totally still is legit).
PWCSponson
2017-11-20 20:44:22 +0000 UTCHaha, my handwriting seemed okay at the time. But you're right, so I changed it to a more readable serif font. I fixed the error as well. Thanks for the input!
PWCSponson
2017-11-20 20:42:26 +0000 UTCAlso loved the story, such juicy descriptions explaining her struggle and situation on the court. <3
Straw
2017-11-20 10:00:44 +0000 UTCI appreciate having the story be side by side the image so as to constantly keep the character's visage in mind while reading. :3 But I think it's good to have the image alone without the story in addition to this.
Straw
2017-11-20 10:00:02 +0000 UTCThe image and story together have thier own charm! (like how the text has to move for her rod) It has a nostalgic quality to it. Although, keeping the text seperate from the image is nice for mobile users. Whatever path you take is fine by me! I also hope there are more viruses to explore in the future!
Braindead Bird
2017-11-20 06:50:55 +0000 UTCI'd like both if it's not too much trouble. Singular picture as well as captioned, and maybe copy paste it to the post itself?
Blastotron
2017-11-20 06:21:28 +0000 UTCLove the stories; you are an excellent writer! I would prefer them separate from the image.
PeterBE
2017-11-20 06:12:20 +0000 UTCI definitely prefer seeing it as text on the post. It's a bit harder to read on the image. Loving the hyper nipples stuff. I'm looking forward to more.
James Russel
2017-11-20 06:03:49 +0000 UTCShe's wonderful! It'd be amazing to watch that virus change a poor girl. Step by overdeveloped step.
What’s Happening to Me
2017-11-20 06:02:58 +0000 UTCThis format is great, though also having the story as the comment makes it easier to read in the notification preview
Misty F.
2017-11-20 05:58:27 +0000 UTCKeen switcheroo there- scoring in tennis lists the server's score first, meaning what one would assume at first to be her being beaten pretty soundly because of her condition instead turns out to be her dominating despite- and, in half, because of- it's changes to her body. Also I appreciate having it all in one image. I greatly enjoy the stories which often elevate the image, so its nice not having to, uh, switch back and forth between the image and a webpage when, uh, trying to 'appreciate' both the image and the story scenario.
James Dougell
2017-11-20 05:02:54 +0000 UTCHaving both is probably a good idea. I'm curious about this virus, and I hope it gets fleshed out a bit.
Xhentai
2017-11-20 04:38:10 +0000 UTCHaveing the story as a comment makes you scroll away from the image. With this format, it's much quicker to look back at the image. Also, I'm loving the whole "Aphrodite Virus" and "Hyper-sex disease" ideas. Keep up the good work!
Tuck
2017-11-20 03:50:03 +0000 UTCPlease at least include the text in actual ascii format as well. That font is painful. I think you also meant "Lavender's cock jutted out", not "jut out".
Fake Name
2017-11-20 03:49:49 +0000 UTCI like this format
PaperLanterns
2017-11-20 03:38:41 +0000 UTC
