Secret meeting after school !

He is sniffin or licking¿

Rodrigo De Ricardo

I understand your point of view about the comic. Concerning Gohan, I think he will avoid talking to Videl about it just to avoid making her angry, because he knows that she will take it out on him too 😉

SAIYAN SLAVE

I manage to post an artwork every Tuesday

SAIYAN SLAVE

How long should we expect the next bit of content to come out

Well, let's see storywise it was simply caulifla finds kale abusing her toy, and a toy she actually is starting to care about. Not a bad story outline. Content wise you had Kale foot gag, stomp and suffocated him while Caulifla showed up in the hallway. That was a great start to the comic. Like hell cause one thinking at least for myself "Holy hell and this is only Kale, the kinder and softer one of the duo." What in blazes in Caulifla going to do? She's actually the mean one, the more domitive as such and literally gets sadistic pleasure out of torturing Cabba. Then it was like Caulifla only popped in at the end, quickly sat on him dismissively and got Kale to lick her feet a little while she scolded her. That last just felt rushed and honestly a bit disappointing and it kinda just killed the whole thing almost if that makes sense. Like it's Caulifla, you expect her to kinda do some really harsh things to these two while also having fun. You started off really strong though. Also yeah i do understand people got sick of waiting like 7 weeks or so and wanting to see other characters again. Like i love Caulifla's stuff so I suppose I didn't mind as much but you can understand those who do not would have hated these past few weeks. Even then waiting almost 2 months for this was a bit much. If it were me I would have done the comic up until page four and left it on a cliffhanger. Then returned later on in a part 2 where it's all Caulifla going really ham on both of them and of course getting pleasure once she had Cabba alone you know? As for Erasa, I still have to question why does she think Gohan won't tell Videl himself? Two, why would she think Gohan would care if she told her? Videl wouldn't believe her anyway, she knows how Gohan is, she knows how Erasa is and would deduce very quickly what might have happened.

Carrotop12

No worries and thanks! I was surprised by some of the comments about this last comic, but I took them all into account and hope to do better for the next one! Of course, I have to make you wait for a week before I can post each page, so I have to make sure to integrate a maximum of explicit content in each of these pages to avoid that the wait is too long, but it doesn't allow me to integrate everything I would like. I will look for solutions for that. Regarding Erasa, let's just say that she will probably never learn her lesson... 😅

SAIYAN SLAVE

Thank you so much for noticing 😅😂❤️ The last few weeks have not been easy but I still love this work so much 😊

SAIYAN SLAVE

Erasa 😂 Thanks a lot 😊

SAIYAN SLAVE

Okay I take it back. The comic is fleshed but I suppose I would have liked to see more Caulifla brutality as it were. But overall you covered a lot so good job. Also yeah props you still got your other works still and the fact you barely waver from your deadline is a credit to you. As for erasa, not seeing how this blackmail could work in the slightest unless this is prior to her being caught

Carrotop12

Can we appreciate that this dude busted his ass on a 7 part comic and then still met his deadline? Bravo, my man.

Videls_footboy

Amazing work as usual .i.forget her name though lol

jovana