Chapter 345: Considering Dead Clues
Added 2022-06-14 23:02:37 +0000 UTCThe explosion rocked the forest with a concussion that stunned both flora and fauna. Nearby trees bent from the force, shedding leaves like rain. Any monster near the windmill was thrown backward, tumbling through the air with Alex’s air elementals. The summons flew end over end, pushed by the inferno’s power until they righted themselves and flew a safe distance away, sparking with blue bolts.
Dust, debris, monster parts and soaring flames erupted from the mill, shooting through the sky, scattering birds, reducing some to fleeing torchlights as their dead masters’ power ebbed away. Alex steadied himself and Gwyllain, hovering in the sky. The asrai was trembling.
“Oh…I…oh…” the fae watched the flames. His eyes were as wide as plates. “W-would you look at that.”
And Alex did look.
And he didn’t like what he saw.
Flames danced in the clearing, the mill blazed like a firestorm.
Life could be fickle. Sometimes it gave opportunities when one wasn’t ready for them. Other times, it handed out chances disguised as ill fortune. Then there were the times where it repeated itself.
Like today.
Once again, life had brought Alex Roth deep within his anger, watching a burning building.
Gwyllain was about to say something else, but one look at the wizard’s face stopped the words from leaving his mouth.
Before them, the windmill was a column of flame. Stone blackened, as everything within turned to flame and smoke like an oil soaked parchment. In heartbeats, the flame climbed, licking at the old wood of the windmill’s blades.
A heartbeat later, they blazed like the sun’s rays.
Whoosh!
Flame burst from the archway, crackling joined with the monsters’ cries.
“Agh, I can’t watch…” The asrai closed one eye, peeking with the other.
“I can,” the wizard said, leaving thoughts of a burning ale house aside. “They tried to kill us. They threw everything they had at us to kill us. So I did the same. I just did it better. It’s just…”
He looked down at the assassin’s broken corpse with disgust. “Anyway, it doesn’t make sense to just float here in mid-air. We’d better make sure we get rid of any stragglers. Come on, we’lI have to clean up the rest of them. After that—when things are safe, I’ll untie you, okay?”
“A-alright,” the asrai said. The flame reflected in his large eyes. “You’re right, it’s not safe if monsters are still running loose down there.”
Alex shouted down to Claygon. “Let’s go hunting, buddy.”
Downing another potion of sensory enhancement, he turned to the forest and cupped his hands over his mouth.
“Who’s left?” he called in otherworldly languages. “Thank you for helping me. Whoever wasn’t sent back to your homes by the enemy, come on out!”
Rustle.
There was movement among the trees.
Blub.
Bubbles rolled out of the brush, leading a couple of water elementals. They bubbled at Alex. A pair of aervespertillos emerged from the canopy along with a clot of taraneas. Two ice elementals and four viper-devils appeared from the undergrowth, crackling and hissing. Air elementals floated over to hover around his shoulders.
“You were all a big help,” He began.
As he spoke to the gathered summons, through the trees, a green-golden light drew closer.
Alex called out in the tongue of his earth elementals. “Wait where you are for now. I want half of you to stay there and guard the tree. Don’t come into the clearing yet! The rest of you? Come with me.”
His summons would soon be fading, so they’d have to move fast.
“We’re going to sweep the area around here,” he instructed. “We’ll stay in a group, except for you aervespetillos and air elementals. I want you to head deep into the woods, and look for any of these.” He pointed at monster corpses dotting the forest floor. “Keep searching, destroy any you find until you’re called back to your home planes.” He pointed at the broken clawed creature. If you see any that look like this one, don’t kill it. Come and get me and we’ll capture it. I’ll summon all of you later for a reward. Go for now.”
The aervespetillos and air elementals soared into the night, disappearing over the trees.
“You guys also have another job.” He switched to a tongue of elemental earth. “I want you to go underground and look for caves, burrows or any place where creatures like the ones we fought could be hiding. If you find anything, let me know.”
They rumbled like shifting rock and sank beneath the earth.
“Oh, and Claygon?” Alex floated up beside his golem and patted one of his large shoulders. “Listen…I don’t know if you’re conscious right now but…don’t feel too bad about that clawed monster hitting the ground. There wasn’t anything you could do. And if it weren’t for you, I’d be dead tonight. So, just so you know, good job, buddy. Good job. I’m going to get you so many puzzle books when we get back to Generasi. And we’re gonna go on a dancing binge!”
Gwyllain looked up at the wizard like he was completely mad. “I’m sorry…did you say dance with him?”
“What, you’ve never danced with a golem in the pale moonlight?” Alex asked.
“C-can’t say I have…” Gwyllain murmured. “...by the fae lords, what have I gotten myself into!” The asrai shook his head. “Tonight’s been…it’s been too much. I think I might sleep for a season to calm my nerves.”
“Yeah, I think calming the nerves is a good idea,” the wizard agreed. “But we can think about that later. First, let’s make sure all those bastards are good and dead.”
Calling forceballs to light their way, Alex slipped into the woods, his enhanced senses tuned to sounds, near and far. He was listening intently, hoping they’d find another clawed monster for Claygon and him to grab. He still had a lot of questions that needed answering and even if they didn’t find a clawed one, he’d settle for any monster that could talk.
Time seemed to drag while they searched. The windmill burned in the distance, filling the night with the light of dancing flame and the roar of an inferno. Claygon, a very jittery Gwyllain, Alex, and his summoned monsters scoured the area, his disappointment growing as they ventured deeper into the woods.
Overall, there wasn’t much left of the monster horde. They came across sleeping monsters—out cold— still under the effects of Alex’s sleeping potions; Claygon smashed them without mercy. The young wizard’s mood grew increasingly darker with every useless silence-spider and venom walker they found. There were no clawed monsters anywhere. No blue annis hags or anything else he could capture; at least nothing that could talk.
The remaining Ravener-spawn lurking in the woods soon found themselves on the receiving end of unwanted contact with Claygon, and with Alex’s summoned monsters. The summons were—one by one—being pulled back to their home planes, leaving Alex facing the reality that…everything he could get information from, was actually dead… He watched Claygon pull a stunned silence spider from a tree and smash it between his fists. ‘There’s nothing to give me any new information, nothing beyond what that monster said…or whatever we can learn from its corpse. Shit! It looks like I’m back at square one…or maybe not. Think about every detail. What did you learn tonight that you didn’t know before?’
As the forest grew quieter, Alex sifted through the night’s events. ‘So. A clawed monster, like the ones that attacked me in Generasi, attacks me in Thameland. It lays a trap, uses the aeld tree and Gwyllain as bait, and lures me out here. It was working with local monsters, like the two at the patrizia’s ball did…no wait, that’s not quite right. Not completely.’
He thought about the blue annis hags: their cursing at him and their promise to eat Gwyllain.
‘That hag wearing amphibian skins…she was the one who caught the asrai and stuck him in a cage in her cave. So, I’m guessing she was probably after revenge and wanted her meal and territory back. Those two hags didn’t seem like they were being controlled by that clawed monster…I mean, they electrocuted it while trying to hit me and Gwyllain, yet they seemed pretty indifferent to it being dead. Which means the clawed monsters are capable of forming alliances. There. That’s something I didn’t know before. Alright, what else was different between tonight’s attack and the one at the patrizia’s ball?’
He looked at the forest around them, glancing down at a venom walker’s corpse.
‘Well, I can see two obvious differences. We’re in Thameland and this attack involved Ravener-spawn, not monsters from the Barrens. So that means the clawed monsters have been seen in three places that I know of: Thameland, Generasi and the Irtyshenan Empire. Three places: different locations, different climates, separated by bodies of water and hundreds of miles. Which means they’re either global, or they travelled from a single location. Now…think about what the creature said.’
“You are our enemy. You wronged my master, and now you must pay the price.”
And then outside the mill, right before it died: “Die! Die! Your hunt must end! No more can you be allowed to walk these lands! You and your kind must die!”
‘So, it was working for some kind of master,’ Alex thought. ‘It said I was its master’s enemy. And its enemy too. It also said that I’d wronged this master and that I was on a hunt, a hunt that needed to end. So, it obviously didn’t want me around here with that ‘no more can you walk these lands’ line. That…that could mean it was after me in particular. But wait…it also said ‘my kind’. So not only am I on its shit list, but it thinks the same thing about whatever group it thinks I’m a part of. Okay, Alex…hypotheses time.’
The wizard thought about why it could have been after him. ‘Could it be because I’m the Fool? My kind could mean ‘the Heroes’, which would mean that its master is the Ravener…or maybe it's someone who has a problem with all Fools….but it never referred to me as the Fool. Also this, ‘your kind must die’ reference: all the other Fools are dead, so that makes no sense. Unless, there are other Fools around…no, that’s getting way too complicated. A simpler explanation would make more sense.’
It had said that he’d wronged its master in some way…so who had he wronged? Who were his enemies? Who would want him dead?
For a brief, mad instant he imagined the ghost of Minervus or a secretly sinister McHarris controlling an army of monsters from the shadows. He shook his head. ‘Focus! Okay, so possible enemies: the main ones would be the Ravener, Ezaliel, and the rest of Burn-Saw’s kindred. They’re all powerful and I’ve done things that would piss off all of them. And this ‘hunt’ that thing was talking about: it could be my hunting dungeon cores, but I haven’t been hunting them by myself. Not yet anyway. So there's not much reason to target me specifically: others-–like the Heroes—have been hunting and smashing them for well over a year. There’s also Ezaliel’s Cult to consider: those demon worshippers are supposed to be hunting for cores too.’
Alex thought about possibilities and different variables he could eliminate…and any variables that made him unique. ‘For one thing there’s the fact that I’m one of the Heroes…but, that doesn’t really seem to be what’s going on here. I controlled a dungeon core for a bit; and saw something through it. Two dungeon cores came after me specifically: the one from the chittererer dungeon and the other one in the cold belcher dungeon. If I’m being hunted because I hijacked the core in the Cave of the Traveller, that puts things squarely on the Ravener’s shoulders. But wait, it doesn’t actually have shoulders, it’s a big round ball. Uh…pretty squarely on the Ravener’s…spherical surface…maybe? Anyway, there’s still some problems with that theory.’ For one, the barrier around Thameland keeps Ravener-spawn in Thameland, yet those monsters weren’t in any of the Thameish bestiaries.
‘The other thing,’ he thought. ‘Is just because the two dungeon cores seemed to focus on me…doesn’t mean they’re after me because I controlled one of them. And even if the dungeon cores are after me because I took over a core, that doesn’t mean this clawed creature was after me for the same reason. Its kin that attacked me at the ball last year were in Generasi. And the demon summoner was calling on Ezaliel’s demons in Generasi. Now, Ezaliel’s demon worshippers are here in Thameland, and one of those same clawed monsters attacked me here in Thameland. That could all be connected to the cult, which might mean the hunt it was talking about is my and Baelin’s hunt for Burn-Saw and information about this Hannar-cim.’
And if those creatures were connected to Ezaliel, that could explain what they were doing around Thameland. But…was that right? Were they actually connected to the cult?
The Traveller’s mana left something on me…something Burn-Saw recognised instantly. Maybe they could smell it too.
‘But those monsters attacked me before I ever knew Burn-Saw existed…then again, the demon summoner was already creating chaos in Generasi, and if something had smelled the Traveller’s presence on me, that could be a reason for targeting me. The Ravener and Ezaliel: both theories make sense, but Leopold’s too dead to question.’
Alex muttered. “My head’s starting to spin. I wish my clues would stop dying.”
“What was that?” Gwyllain gave him a startled look.
“Oh, nothing,” Alex said, coming out of his thoughts.
He glanced around the woods.
The trees were still.
He hadn’t heard his aervespertillos’ cries or air elementals’ crackles lately, and there’d been no monsters stalking them in the underbrush for a while. If monsters had survived, they were few…and they were long gone.
Things were calmer. The only sound reaching his ears was the roar from the windmill burning.
Before they headed back, he checked with his earth elementals’ to see how their search for hidden dungeons was going. They reported that the area was clear so far, and some of them were being called home to their otherworldly plane. He told them he’d check back with them when he reached the clearing.
It was time for him, Gwyllain, and Claygon to get back to the windmill so he could douse the fire before it spread and reduced the woods to cinders. He’d have a pretty hard time explaining that level of destruction to Professor Jules; he picked up speed. On their way back, he could find out how Gwyllain was doing, afterall, the fae had been pretty traumatised tonight. When the fire was out, he would get the aeld tree, collect any remains he and Claygon could carry, then return to camp.
But, first things first…the poor asrai would probably very much want to be untied the second they touched ground.
Comments
Has Alex grown a bit dumb with all that muscle building ? It can happen - repetitive muscle building can reduce brain neurons. I mean didn't he realize that the Hunter was using [Ravener Spawn]. I mean, when do external parties use [Ravener Spawn] - they all only obey the Ravener or its designated commanders.
lenkite
2022-07-01 13:31:47 +0000 UTCAgreed. Imo, it's also a bit of a writing flaw to reveal something so obvious to us so early and then keep creating scenarios that lead the MC to just narrowly missing the oppurtunity to understand what all of the readers have known for several hundred chapters. Rather than feeling excited for him getting closer to the truth, it just feels annoying to me that the character can't figure it out when so many clues have been dropped in front of him.
ZaA
2022-06-18 14:21:14 +0000 UTCThe issue with unnatural bird behavior is that it is a wizard encampment and there are likely familiars everywhere add in that fact that they are very much distracted with other things, the Hags were ancient powerful and cunning casters in their own right and Bailen is not always there and you get a decent case for not noticing
Thomas Hendrix
2022-06-15 19:08:03 +0000 UTCI agree with the birds stuff, or at least find it confusing with how it's written - i.e. if there was some comments from the hags to mirror the actions of birds in the area i wouldn't mind them missing it. The Hunter though I think Alex's deductions are reasonable because he's been finding them all over the place - at least reasonable to keep an open mind for other options. However, that's with me thinking he'll be talking to Baelin about his hypotheses and narrows it down more to controlling the Core as being the most likely.
nugitoBambino
2022-06-15 15:56:58 +0000 UTCYou don’t have to be native to an area to recognize the unnatural behavior of the birds. Also, there two people at the camp who are natives of the area, like the protagonist of the story for instance. Baelin had been to the camp several times while this bird surveillance was taking place, with the ridiculous amount of experience, power, and knowledge he had of magic, there’s no way he’s not feeling the mana being used to control the birds , in a low mana area. Got cut off on my phone earlier. The wizards were indeed suspicious of Thameland and the residents, or at least they were prepared to be on the lookout for betrayal. Recall when Baelin first teleported when the expedition began and was bracing them for the very real possibility that he could be betrayed by Thameland. I'd be shocked if the orders given to the watchers in that area has ever been "at ease all is well." That being said, the Watchers were basically depicted as something akin to incompetent Storm Troopers this arc so that's a whole other issue, but leads to the same "good guys are dumb for arc to work" problem I'm having.
JKincaid
2022-06-15 13:11:56 +0000 UTCI see one glaring problem with Alex logic. The Hunter wasn't just controling monsters this time. It was controlling Ravener-Spawn. And considerig that Ravener-Spawn are specifically created to further the Raveners goals, it would be pretty strange if outside actors could take control of them. If nothing else, that should tip Alex off about the Hunters identity.
Jeanean
2022-06-15 12:13:12 +0000 UTCI like most of it, I’m just frustrated at their logic.
Aidan Geverdt
2022-06-15 10:35:02 +0000 UTCI don't like this arc. For reasons already stated by the other readers.
Julien Fellegara
2022-06-15 05:49:23 +0000 UTCCalling it now McHarris is the form the Ravener takes while resting between cycles.
war doggle
2022-06-15 05:46:32 +0000 UTCWhile I have had these same feelings from time to time we should consider that, when we think of the Generasi administration do we think of Bealin or Jules? We also should consider that 1. The Hags did use only small flocks and individual birds for surveilance. 2. No one at the camp is a native of the area. 3. The Generasi likely do not really expect trouble from anything besides Ravener's spawns. 4. The Generasi are likely somewhat arogant and underestimate Thameland. 5. Bealin is not there to supervise.
mant06
2022-06-15 04:40:20 +0000 UTCI have had the same issue with this entire arc, and I've stated it multiple times. People are giving the author the benefit of the doubt, but inconsistent writing deserves criticism and considered revision. The writing isn't always perfect, and considering how many times it was pointed out that "nobody noticed the birds" within the story text, I'm going to take the author at his word. Nobody in the entire Generasi camp noticed the unnatural flock of birds. It's completely inconsistent with what we know of Generasi wizards, what we know of Baelin, but we're just supposed to accept that even the sheltered church spy took notice of the birds but the wizards didn't. It's not consistent with the information previously given about the world and these particular wizards. Even Alex was completely surprised to find out that his enemies could control the birds... one of his closest friends had a freaking bird familiar that it can control, yet this was still news to Alex. This particular issue just makes the arc not work. All the "good guys" are suddenly complete idiots for no reason. The worst part is, this all could have happened without the stupid birds surveilling the camp 24/7. They didn't do anything either way.
JKincaid
2022-06-15 02:57:04 +0000 UTCHonestly he doesn't need to know exactly who is hunting him or why in this case because knowing the ravener is pissed at him for knowing how to manipulate the cores probably wouldn't change his plans and the ravener is already his top enemy
Dominic French
2022-06-15 00:47:33 +0000 UTCI perosnally like Alex's thought process. Limitig himself to just one possibility can get one killed. As a proper wizzard, one can never be too careful. We have all informations, so it is easy to reach a conclusion, but we only know so much, becouse the author gave us related information. We know worldbuilding behind the scene, but in story you have only worldbuilding that is important to story context. Alex can just assume that some magical dragon is after him, becouse something his ancestor did and he can't rule it out, since he doesn't have author worldbuilding notes.
Kary_PL
2022-06-15 00:05:57 +0000 UTCBig batta boom
Authorii
2022-06-15 00:04:30 +0000 UTCAgreed, trying to tie things to Ezaliel seems.. like the biggest jump to make. Maybe I'm just misunderstanding something, but from what the story thus far has shown and told the reader Ravener-spawn are created and controller by the Ravener, it's cores and "Generals" made by cores. So between the Hunter talking about serving a Master, the focused aggression from the dungeon core and the fact that the bloody Hunter is actively controlling and directing Ravener-spawn should be such a clear thing. Even the whole excuse of Ravener-spawn not being able to leave the country should be scrutinized by Alex because he was able to sneak around the very same barrier l. Also Alex is already suspicious that the kingdom and/or clergy is hiding something so unlisted monsters in the public bestiary should be something Alex would consider (as a side note I could have sworn that early chapters stated that dungeon cores occasionally created new monsters to counteract threats.. which we know is actually the Ravener who has a library of monster templates apparently he hands out). It just seems.. contrived that Alex is even acknowledging any other possibility at this point. There is a ton about this story that I love, especially it's world building, but dang if my biggest criticism for this whole arc so far isn't that everyone seems to be generally dumbed the heck down either in the way they deduct, think things through or just observations to the point that some characters and factions seem to be way less than what they've been shown to be thus far. And for the love of me I can't tell if this is an issue of the author doing too much to show the reader what is actually going on that the reader is left wondering why the characters don't notice.. anything.. or if this is a reaction to the concept of "power creep" where all the wizard factions were shown to be at certain standard but now they are in an environment where they so utterly outshine and over perform the locals that the wizard faction has to be reeled in and brought to heel so as to not curb stomp all the current issues. I'm still greatly enjoying the story and am holding out that things will wrap up nicely, but I'd be lying if all the characters are starting to get on my nerves. 😂
Enzer
2022-06-14 23:54:25 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2022-06-14 23:53:25 +0000 UTC22m
Captdeth
2022-06-14 23:25:49 +0000 UTCPow pow well there goes mom & dad time to be BatFool
ItWasIDIO!!
2022-06-14 23:18:42 +0000 UTCKind of strange that 60% of this chapter was Alex thinking about why he’s being targeted when it’s honestly the most obvious thing. He knows that the cores are after him, and those weird monsters focused on him too. It just makes sense that you’d pair those things together. I don’t understand his thought process.
Aidan Geverdt
2022-06-14 23:17:14 +0000 UTCInteresting, but the 'these lands' comment should probably tip him off to what's going on, oh well. Still, he got an Aeld tree out of it, hopefully he can get it back in good condition!
abowden
2022-06-14 23:08:18 +0000 UTCHello everybody and thank you for your support, almighty chosen and eight super cool fools! And so we get to the aftermath of the battle. Alright, I'm in the middle of editing right now, so I'll see y'all tomorrow!
J.M. Clarke
2022-06-14 23:06:28 +0000 UTC