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The Sisters of Dorley — Chapter 47 Part 2 — And Just Where Did You Blow In From? (16.5k words)

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No Cora what are you doing :(

JanaKat

Lovely.

Wren Roberts

Unsure if this is gonna be the direction you're heading in but i like the characterization of Alistair S-F thus far as a guy whose heart's not really into the whole forcefemme thing. Between the two of them Henrietta is the true freak; Alistair is here out of boredom and because number go up, or at least that's the impression I get. Something something banality of evil something something.

Evie the Sunshine Princess

Dorley Hall — testicular cancer prevention service without NHS waiting list. 😉

Sparifankerl

Dorley Hall — testicular cancer prevention experts. 😉

Sparifankerl

Why is Leigh always living rent free inside of my head?

Jade Diaz

This whole chapter (subchapter??) was sooooooooooo cute <3 <3 <3

Gab

Alyson!! The scene with Leigh hit SO hard - her jealousy about height and passing was painfully real and you handled it beautifully as always. Also Bethany's breakdown. Devastating. Poor girl. The Consensus chat was the PERFECT way to show they're still connected even apart.... but I fear for them. Diana's advice about finding kind people 🥺💕

Emory Ahlberg

Part 2! part 2! Thank you! I hope you recovery is going well and you're getting enough rest! Is it bad that this is making me consider rereading the whole series when I just (binge) read it last month..? 😭

SpamIsNotMyName

There exists a numbered set of scenes for the final part of the chapter which will absolutely not be added to! It will be three parts only! I bloody hope...

Alyson Greaves

Woke up early, saw this and know my day was going to be a good one. There are very few writers who can make me cry on one page and then laugh on the next while feeling that the characters are real people with real emotions and lives. You are one of them. Both Beth and Leigh made me sob but they also made me laugh - Beth in the bedroom farce of the texts at the end and Leigh with her bittersweet admittance that she fancied a gay guy and 'welcome to straight trans womanhood'. I honestly don't know how you thought this was all going to fit into something shorter than the three parts which, based on the first two could just be split into chapters 47-49. I'm not complaining and have done something similar myself - my original plan to update an essay I wrote early in my transition and bring it up to date was intended to be 8000 words. It ended up being 108,000. So I get it, I really do. But even so... Looking forward to part 3 (of 6) of the chapter.

Ellen Mellor

this has arrived just in time for my four hour infusion session at the hospital 🥹 I have something to READ!!

Rozelle


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