Dungeon Divers Page 1b Redraw
Added 2021-10-04 05:17:25 +0000 UTCHowdy! I'm redrawing the first few pages of Dungeon Divers in preparation for the book. I split the first page up, here's the second, third and fourth panels redrawn:
I took the opportunity to edit the pacing and layout a bit. You can compare to the original comic:
More to come!
Comments
I like the original, but it really shows what you can do when things no longer have to be self-contained. ^-^
Crissa Kentavr
2021-10-04 18:05:23 +0000 UTCThis is great. It's amazing to me how the pacing changes by re-working the panel layouts and composition. I love the refined expressions and body language.
Phuul
2021-10-04 14:30:46 +0000 UTC
