Dungeon Divers Page 15 Redraw
Added 2022-08-22 17:43:26 +0000 UTCI ended up redrawing a lot more of this that I had originally intended to but I didn't feel the need to make any huge changes to the storyboard/layout, so I'm calling that a win. Things are headed in the right direction, at least.
And here's the original:
Thanks as always for your support! More soon!
Comments
Yeah, I had that reaction as well. It took looking at the old version to realize it was Bront's line.
William Cole
2022-08-23 04:10:29 +0000 UTCI feel like the tail on the final word balloon is ambiguous in the new version. I initially read Bront's open mouth as his dumfounded reaction to Bryn saying "Should have gone with 'axe me anything.' " Just my $0.02.
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2022-08-23 01:41:19 +0000 UTC
