Gift Horse page 1
Added 2022-11-12 08:34:08 +0000 UTC
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Nice cant wait to see all pages.
Andrew Jacobs
2022-11-12 21:01:55 +0000 UTCI actually cut 6? panels out. The last four panels were actually the start of the original page 2, with three following panels afterward. The rest of the planned panels will be on the next page. All that was missing was Tina coming home, waiting for Virgil, contemplating opening just one present, selecting and opening the present, reacting to the wedding ring and it's ramifications, and finally putting it on. The sequence felt too much like padding. I believe the dialogue and her admiring the ring set the stage better. Now for the fun to begin!
PeaNutt_Buta
2022-11-12 10:55:20 +0000 UTC
