Monthly Comic - Son Finds His Mom Online Part 2 (Pgs 7,8,9)
Added 2023-07-04 13:00:10 +0000 UTCBen and his mother Martha continue making their video, this time doing something a little different.
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Please Please make more of this I’m begging you
ConsciousJunk
2023-07-07 18:23:40 +0000 UTCOH man, this set of pages is incredible. p7 - I love how Mommy Martha looks here. Her lips look SO pretty and I love the dreamy, hazy look in her eyes, the way they're a little unfocused from how good he's making her feel. I love the casual little wave and I love how BIG and WIDE her hips and ass look behind her. Her thick body looks SO sexy! I like the dialogue in these sets of pics, how she's talking to the audience as she gets fucked. She knows how to talk in the naughtiest, most exciting way as she talks so candidly to the perverts watching; from the moment she introduces herself as "Mommy Martha" she has won me over! p8 - the action on this page and the next, the comic-making skills on display are so good! I like how you letter her moans and outbursts that interrupt her reading the comments; it really gets across the squealing, surprised tone of her feeling good and the excitement of her struggling to get through reading them. And I like how NAUGHTY all the comments are! They're so hot and her reading them is so fun. I like in porn when there is dialogue, talking, more than just moans for some reason, and the way you write her reading all these really naughty comments is just as exciting as hearing her voice for real. I love the action, the different panels and angles that focus on him fucking her. I love how big, plump and soft her ass looks in panel 1 as he squeezes it. I love her cute face and lips in panel 2 as she keeps reading, almost maintaining her calm. I ADORE panel 3 and the TIIGHT way her pussy clings to his cock thrusting in and out of her so much. And I love her eyes in the last panel, the soft strain in her expression as she's losing it to how good she feels and how hard she's being fucked. p9 - I love how Benny eggs her on to keep reading; I like the feeling that he's getting turned on hearing her read all the fawning comments of people loving her and loving that he's fucking her. The comment she reads there about how they can't stop watching and how they've watched their video so many times is fun. It's such and honest and unrestrained admission of how that viewer can't stand how hot they are and how turned on by watching Mommy Martha and her boy fuck There's something exciting about being that open with how horny they make that commenter lol That booty-smack in panel 1 is SO GOOD! The motion blur works well there and the way the lineart itself "blurs" really sells the quick, sudden impact of the spank. That closeup of her ass makes it look SO BIG and HEAVY and the smack feels strong and heavy, too, as necessary to have any impact on her big butt. Even without sound effects of dialogue that drawing itself would make that impact, the heavy smacking sound, really clear in your mind. I love her expression in the bottom panel. Seeing her continually falling apart and losing her composure to pleasure is so cute. The way she has to prop herself up and lean on an arm, the way her big tits press against the bed, the way her head droops, her big, goofy smile lolls open, the way you show hte wobble in her arms as she's loosing strength...everything is GORGEOUS. She's turning into more and more of a gorgeous mess and she looks so happy! Incredible art, incredible comic-making and telling the story through comics. The expressions, her body, everything is so irresistably sexy! And I like how this particular story pulls us as in readers, with her interacting and talking to her viewers it feels like she's talking to us as the comic-readers, and a lot of that really sexy interaction carries through to us, too. It's a fun effect that puts us, the real-life audience, into the action since there's a role of her fictional audience that we can put ourselves into. Always impressed as hell by your art and your comics. Incredible work.
dorky
2023-07-04 16:13:32 +0000 UTC
