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Rejected punchline for June 16, 2018

I'd forgotten about this one until I went looking for another series of unused strips for this storyline.  At this moment I'm not entirely sure I'm gonna show them off here -- a few put too fine a point on the Mike flashback storyline and I think I might rather leave a lot of it ambiguous.  We'll see.  Maybe try to be persuasive if you strongly disagree. 

But here's another strip from this storyline, unrelated, which I ended up altering.  (final above) I guess I thought the visual gag was too visual gag-y?  Maggie liked it fine when I put it past her, but it didn't achieve the tone I wanted.  Plus Amber should be a little more competent than that.  

The final punchline ended up being more character-based (and reminded us of Amber's actual limitations after she just, y'know, superhacked something), so I am much more satisfied with it.  

Butt hanging out of the wall looks pretty funny, though.

Rejected punchline for June 16, 2018

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