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Unused strip for May 19, 2023

more discarded punchlines i dug up

The unused final panel here rang a little false to me.  Like, the tone and direction were wrong?  Well, maybe not specificaly wrong, just ringing the same bell too many times.  Not every Joe and Joyce interaction should be about how Joyce is horny!  and specifically for joe's butt.  And so I made it adorable instead, see below:

This way we get some character movement from Joe as well.  Joe feels safe in being regarded as a sexual object, but this angle of Huggable Romantic Person is new!  

Unused strip for May 19, 2023

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Count me amongst those who think it was a good call. Also, I now have ""Wiggle It (Just a Little Bit)" by 2 In A Room stuck in my head, a song I have thankfully not thought about even once since the nineties, so thanks for that.

Daibhid Ceannaideach

Yep, good call, I like the nuance added to Joe.

AliniTheGreat


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