Unused strip for March 19, 2022
Added 2022-03-19 14:35:40 +0000 UTCAn earlier, unpublished version of the strip that ran today! There are things I like about it better, like the pacing at the beginning, but ended up consolidating it in favor of spending more (any) panel time hanging on Becky's decision.
As-was, it's a little vague on what's happening in the final panel, because it could be read as Dina pulling her in and it's not Becky lunging forward? But with the new panel, we see that Dina is asking and waiting for a response before action occurs, which is better.
Also I like Dina using a contraction and then Becky responding without one. It's cute.
Final published version:
Comments
Ah, the art to squeesh more and more content, to fit all story in a page. I'm not being ironic: I kind understand the stuggle Willis is getting here.
Amós Batista
2022-03-20 09:39:12 +0000 UTCMeant to create a new paragraph, not a second post - new patron, still getting the hang of this. Anyway, your instincts on the re-do were spot-on, and thanks as always for these behind-the-scenes glimpses into your process.
Harold
2022-03-19 19:12:00 +0000 UTC
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