This one's pretty simple. Originally I had Sal arrive with Danny. But it was better if instead I had Amber in a corner and Sal just materialized. Their rivalry this storyline needed to be better pedestaled.
So then this first panel here was rewritten to be only Danny arriving:
(plus, if you check the two strips' respective panel widths, reducing panel one to Just Danny gave me enough room to make the final panel wide enough to also include Sarah)
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2024-07-16 22:36:29 +0000 UTCSeth Aaron Hershman has they she pronouns
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