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Early update for October 14, 2024

once again wack'd has script-doctored my carla punchline

back in.... march

so long ago

Early update for October 14, 2024

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That’s how we know Charlie will be okay.

Andrea Andrew

As always, great insight into the process. How often does something like that happen (i.e., needing to rewrite a strip because even you, the creator, have misremembered details like "oh, wait, Character A doesn't actually know [X] about Character B," etc.)?

Harold

The reasoning for the script assist was I wrote an AMAZING punchline (according to me) that unfortunately relied on Carla thinking Amazi-Girl is who was on her derby team. Unfortunately, Amazi-Girl does play on Carla's derby team, but everyone thinks she's Amber (whose Derby name is "Slamber"). So I had to workshop something different. I don't... remember what the original punchline was, as I didn't save it, like a fool, but Wack'd helped me sort out what else Carla could say.

David Willis

Off topic (but kind of not really): There is now a lovely preview panel (dated July 18, 2025) on the DoA Tumblr depicting Carla and Charlie in Carla's room, sharing a comfortable silence while doing different things. (There was a previous preview panel of the two of them, but there's a serenity to this one that's just wonderful.)

Harold

Also, the breath puffs backlit by the sun only show when A-G is looking over the edge and breathing.

Dan Rabin

Borderless panel 2 highlights Amazi-Girl crouching down on the roof so nobody on the ground can see her put the mask on: Carla doesn't know about the shared body. A-G being "off the clock" is very touching. She seems to want to spend the day just chilling on roofs, but her concern for Dina looks likely to intrude on the idyll.

Dan Rabin

@Andrea Andrew: Carla's obliviousness is even worse than that - reminder that her roller-derby teammate IS Amazi-Girl (not Amber).

Harold

Of course Carla can’t tell that Amber and AG are part of the same person.

Andrea Andrew

@Lisa: Of course she knows their names! There's Not-Carla #1, Not-Carla #2 ...

Harold

The sun glare dots 🧑‍🍳💋

The Balloon Animal

Well, she wouldn't SEE her, no

BBCC

... Did Carla never learn her teammates' names?

Lisa

Carla's right though, I don't think Amazi-Girl saw the girl she's talking about.

Brian Danger Hicks

the carla whisperer

Seth Aaron Hershman has they she pronouns

Carla: there’s a girl on my roller derby team that looks just like you! Amazi girl: 😑

GPanda


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