Small chapter 61 update
Added 2021-09-14 00:30:32 +0000 UTCAlso, after looking through Chapter 61, I've gone and updated things a bit. the plot hasn't changed at all, but I've given the person who escorts Xiulan to the sect a name, Bolin, and made elder Yi less outwardly aggressive. They're small changes, but I find it improves the chapter. Gou Ren's part hasn't changed.
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I think it's great though I woild make a small switch and change "So, what did this hidden master..." to "And... What did this hidden master..." in order to increase the implication.
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2021-09-14 01:34:11 +0000 UTCBolin...from Avatar the legend of korra
Len
2021-09-14 00:59:21 +0000 UTCThe changes were subtle, but I like what you’ve done. Thanks!
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