Rise Kujikawa (Persona 4) SFW
Added 2022-07-31 21:47:42 +0000 UTC
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Red_draws
2022-08-01 12:53:31 +0000 UTCThank you, Seph! I'm truly happy that you like it! Drawing Rise was super fun and designing her a cute swimsuit was even better! π₯°
Red_draws
2022-08-01 12:53:14 +0000 UTCThank youuuβ€
Red_draws
2022-08-01 12:44:02 +0000 UTCThanks again, Sirβ€ And thanks above all for the note! In fact it's true and I completely forgot about it * sigh *. The heat makes me really careless! They are not details that I often draw, so I tend to forget a few details here and there, but I hope to improve a lot in this too β€
Red_draws
2022-08-01 12:43:48 +0000 UTCThis is very good!
PhantomS
2022-08-01 03:30:50 +0000 UTCWhat a lovely way to end the month and help us cope with the intense heat that has come with it! At this point, it's becoming increasingly challenging to find new things to say about your work... That said, I think I still have one more in-depth comment in me, just for you. π To start, the usual suspects are here and are true to form. Rise looks great in your style, and you've given her a more curvaceous form that's complimented by your usually superb lineart, great shading, and wonderful outfit designs. At this point, those elements have seemed to become staples of your work, but we shouldn't take for granted the effort you've applied to making them as such in all of your art. As for things more specific to this piece, I see where you experimented with the composition a bit. Tilted angles are always an interesting way to play with a piece's focal point, perspective, and other details. It looks to me like you played around with the rule-of-thirds approach a bit, with Rise's face occupying one of those spaces. In any case, it looks really nice. The overall scene is not particularly busy, but there's enough additional background detail of interest to enjoy. Namely, the palm leaves are nicely drawn, and the wooded and stone areas have good texture and shading. I like that you kept the water droplets from us until the final piece. π The way they look as the emerge from the showerhead is a cool touch, and they flow nicely on the skin's surface, too. Although, this is where I would offer one critique. I could be wrong, but it has my understanding that water darkens the surface on which it is resting outside of the edge of the droplet itself. Since that isn't the case in this piece, all of the water on the skin looks like super large drops and have a slightly milky look. It by no means kills the piece, though, and I think the water as a whole serves as much more of a positive than negative. It makes this piece a bit more than your ordinary (but still great) summer pin-up by offering an atmospheric effect that's interacting with Rise in this instance. --- Looks like that's about it. I'll say once again that seeing how you're solidifying your style, while also looking for ways to make your pieces more dynamic, just tells me that you're at an exciting place as an artist right now. It takes of certain level of proficiency to even want to get more creative with each new piece, and that means that your range of skills will only expand and better compliment what you already do so well. Be sure to enjoy these moments in your journey as best as you can. Thanks for welcoming me here and allowing me to comment at my heart's content. See you around, friend! π
SirGOGetter
2022-08-01 00:56:11 +0000 UTCAmazing!
BadWolf
2022-07-31 23:10:21 +0000 UTCAmazing work on this piece, she looks great in your style and the swimsuit design is super cute!
Aqua
2022-07-31 22:14:24 +0000 UTC
