Chapter 92 – Negotiations
Added 2024-11-15 07:00:06 +0000 UTCNesha remained holed up in her house for a couple hours, much to the crowd’s dismay. She did walk out eventually, casually strolling towards the building next door, yawning along the way. Everyone but Percy quickly masked the frustration in their expressions, unwilling to risk pissing her off.
As eager as Percy was to approach her, he decided to blend with the others at first, waiting patiently for the opportune moment. Nesha finally opened the gambling den, letting her customers inside. Only after everyone was sitting at different tables, engaging in various games involving dice or cards did Percy grab the chance to talk to her.
“About that thing I mentioned earlier–” he started saying, before she interrupted him.
“You’re really keen on this, aren’t you?” she rolled her eyes.
Percy frowned.
“Shouldn’t you be too? I told you it’s going to be worth your time. And you know I’m telling the truth.”
“I know you believe that. If I had a brown chip every time somebody made a similar claim, I wouldn’t have needed to open the gambling den in the first place.”
Realizing she was going to take some convincing, and also understanding this wasn’t the place to make a scene, Percy opted for a subtler approach. He handed her a small pouch, before speaking.
“Look, words are cheap. Open it when you’re back at home and try out the thing inside. In private. I swear it’s safe. I’ve included instructions on how to use it. We’ll discuss the rest later.”
Seeing her accept it, Percy left the building. He genuinely had no clue how Nesha would react to the new elixir. Its value would definitely speak for itself, but that still wasn’t a guarantee she’d be willing to collaborate with him. Perhaps, she wouldn’t want to take the risk, or she’d be too lazy to bother.
‘Nothing ventured, nothing gained, I suppose…’
Returning home, he spent the rest of the day compressing crystals. It appeared he could only keep Synchronization active for a couple hours at a time. That said, he estimated he could use it three times per day, assuming they were adequately spaced apart. Taking everything into account, he calculated how many doses of the new elixir he could brew per day. He needed to figure that out before discussing specifics with Nesha.
‘My yield with the regular elixirs has increased to 31% over the past year…’
The improvement was minuscule, though that was to be expected, as gains truly slowed down past 30%. Still, that meant his yield was a little under 68% for every one of the three steps. Each brewing session currently took him around 40 minutes. However, all those numbers would change drastically if he brewed the new elixirs from scratch, as the recipe involved five steps now. That meant his overall yield would drop to 14% and each batch would take over an hour.
Percy quickly shook his head.
‘No. That would be a waste of time. I’ll ditch the first three steps.’
If he bought pre-brewed elixirs to use as his materials instead of nectar, he’d only have to go through the last two steps. A quick calculation revealed his yield would climb to over 45% that way, and he could cut the brewing time to under half an hour.
Of course, it would cost him much more, but he guessed that would ultimately be negligible in the grand scheme of things, as the new steps would be the most profitable ones by far. That way, he could start with 400 drops of regular elixir and 4 cyan crystals every session, ending up with about 180 drops of the new product. And he could do that twice an hour.
‘So, if I also take into account the time needed to actually condense the crystals, I can probably brew about 19 doses per day.’
That wasn’t too bad. He currently needed 6 for himself, though that might go up to 9 depending on what Micky’s second affinity ended up being. The rest he could sell.
‘Hmmm... Let’s not sell all of it. I also need to build myself a stash for when I leave the Guild.’
Making up his mind, Percy was about to head off to Freddy’s, when somebody knocked on his door, startling him.
‘Moment of truth…’ he thought, crossing his fingers.
Rarely getting visitors, he knew it was either Nesha here to make a deal, or an official of the Guild here because she ratted him out. Opening the door, he was relieved to see it was the former. In fact, she looked a little different to how she usually did, her expression being a touch brighter, an ambitious glint noticeable in her eyes. Percy couldn’t help but smile, realizing she had taken the bait, when a mischievous idea crossed his mind. Perhaps, he should slam the door in her face, to get back at her for earlier.
‘Nah, let’s not antagonize the eccentric girl now that she’s finally onboard…’
Still, it was difficult to keep the smugness out of his voice.
“Well, I take it you’re interested all of a sudden?”
Nesha ignored him, rolling her eyes. She shoved him inside before letting herself into the house, closing the door behind her.
“Do you have any idea what this means?!”
This was Percy’s first time hearing actual excitement in her tone.
“Duh, why do you think I came to you?” he asked back.
Nesha let the response sink in for a couple of seconds, before walking over to Percy’s kitchen and plopping down on a chair. She then crossed one leg over the other before speaking again.
“Who else knows about this?”
Percy shrugged.
“My alchemy mentor helped me perfect the recipe, but he’s promised to stay quiet for the next twenty years. I can brew them by myself.”
Nesha nodded.
“You do realize what you’re asking of me, right? It’s not easy smuggling anything out of the Guild, let alone something like this. You need to pull all sorts of strings to make this happen. And that’s just to get them out of the settlement. Let’s not even mention the difficulty involved in finding a rich, reliable customer.”
Percy grabbed another chair, setting it a couple metres in front of Nesha before joining her.
“Can you make it happen, or not?”
She grinned.
“I want 50%.”
But Percy failed to suppress a chuckle.
“Talk about a rip off. I’m the one who has to spend all day in a lab. 30%.”
“No way. It’s really time consuming on my end too. 40%.”
Percy shook his head.
“You can’t do this without me, but I can do it without you.”
“Need I remind you that I can tell when you lie?” she smiled.
“Fine. I admit I don’t have any other options available right now. Still, I can take my sweet time finding somebody else. Good luck reinventing the recipe by yourself.” Percy didn’t back down.
Though Nesha was clearly just as stubborn.
“You won’t find a better middleman than me. Even ignoring my bloodline, I have connections to the Asclepius House.”
Percy raised an eyebrow.
The Asclepius House was one of the 7 Great Houses. Their prestige aside, one of their most important traits was they possessed a lot of people with the Memory Bank bloodline. It allowed them to freely manipulate or even erase their own memories.
One of the House’s most valuable assets was a specially trained order known as the Oblivious Agents. They could execute a sensitive task and then erase all memory of it afterwards, thus eliminating all trails leading back to the one who commissioned it.
If Percy and Nesha went through them to contact their potential buyer, they would more easily keep themselves anonymous, cutting their losses in case they got betrayed. Not to mention that she could also use her own bloodline to ensure they didn’t cheat her.
“Fine, 35% and we have a deal.” Percy conceded.
“35% is just my share.” she emphasized. “Keep in mind that hiring an Oblivious Agent is going to cost us a lot too.”
Percy wasn’t happy to hear that, but he knew she was telling the truth.
“How much do you think the elixirs can even sell for?”
“Beats me.” Nesha admitted. “If I was free to auction them all over Remior, they could easily sell a hundred times more than the regular ones.”
“That much?!” Percy was shocked.
He knew it was a big deal, but that was still more than his estimates. After all, they could only be used three times as often.
“These things don’t scale linearly. It’s a premium item. Do you have any idea how many people would fight over them? Imagine how much money somebody close to Violet would be willing to spend to save themselves a few centuries.”
Percy swallowed a lump of saliva as he pondered the implications. It was true. It wasn’t easy to put a price tag on something that could save a noble House from the verge of extinction, or even elevate them to a Great House.
“But you can’t auction them freely, can you?” he caught the caveat in her words.
“Naturally not.” she said, exhaling in disappointment. “If I did that, everyone who lost the auction would just publicize the elixirs to get back at us. Needless to say, everything would go to shit at that point. I need to investigate potential candidates and only approach those I think will pay the most.”
“So how much do you think we can make?” Percy asked again.
She shrugged.
“It’s hard to say before doing my due research. We can’t push too far given the circumstances. Still, I guess it shouldn’t be too difficult to sell them for over a dozen times as much as the regular elixirs.”
Percy nodded. That was a lot of money. Even after keeping most doses to himself and taking out Nesha’s share and the rest of their expenses, it would still be enough to afford Micky’s potions after a few months.
“Very well.” he said, extending his hand. “But I’ll need your help with a couple more things.”
Comments
This is business. They can become friends, but only by having mutual respect with one another. For that, she needs to make money for her work. No one in their right mind would work at a loss unless they had some plan to further leverage things, but she definitely doesn't. This is an under the table, extremely dangerous arrangement that can get her into big trouble. It's also short term. She knows that he has no one else right now, but the second people find out about these triple elixirs, he's going to become extremely famous and influential. An orphaned girl with a truth-telling bloodline would have much less use than his Violet grandfather and clan. She would no longer be his business partner -an equal- and instead become an employee. Establishing that she has the self-respect not to give away her hard work puts her in a great position. Also, you're under the impression that she knows about the MC's special abilities. For all she knows, this will be the only important thing he does in his entire life. This is a major breakthrough. He's not going to do it again (if this was real life). He's also a Red. So, no, author. You really don't have to do anything to clarify this (not that you can since you're publishing 40 chapters ahead of this post).
Michael
2024-11-15 22:30:00 +0000 UTCHe's being fleeced 💀💀
Arav Shah
2024-11-15 22:12:26 +0000 UTCIf I was her I'd do the same thing, as a savvy magical businesswoman she should be able to make 25 percent returns with most businessmen ik making 20 percent year on year irl. Over 20 years that would probably be more than other things a super genius alchemist can get her.
Arav Shah
2024-11-15 22:10:54 +0000 UTCAlright, maybe I'll clean it up a little in the next edit. The Oblivious Agent cost IS outside her 35% share. But the cost of the elixirs would be joint.
PathOfPen
2024-11-15 17:45:29 +0000 UTCI thought he had fallen for the "net or gross income" trick, agreeing to give her a flat 35% of the sale price regardless of expenses. Turns out she is not quite that ruthless, luckily for Percy.
Jethro H
2024-11-15 14:45:42 +0000 UTCMaybe consider clearing up some of the wording then; [“Fine, 35% and we have a deal.” Percy conceded. “35% is just my share.” she emphasized. “Keep in mind that hiring an Oblivious Agent is going to cost us a lot too.”] Emphasising that 35% is her share, followed by the cost of an Oblivious Agent makes it sound like it's coming from a portion of income separate from her 35%, rather than being shared. Maybe add in a short line like "Of net or gross income?" or something similar to clear it up, I think 35% of profit is a lot more reasonable. Thank you for the chapter btw, this is not meant to be in anyway hateful :)
Jethro H
2024-11-15 14:40:39 +0000 UTCI am unclear on her thought process it needs to be clarified later she appears to have decided to maximize short/medium term profit at the cost Of a long term relationship with an individual who upgraded the elixer as an actual child like 20 or something i doubt that is where the story is going but it makes little sense to leverage an individual to this extent when a long term good relationship is far more valuable then an extra 20% over the next 20 years because after that he should never deal with her again and that assumes he cannot get his family to take over distribution before then maybe add a bit later on where it is clarified that she thought he would negotiate better or something because up to this point she has been shown to be an intelligent forward thinker with business savvy either clarify buisness relationships are a weakness or she did not intend for him to be so bad at bargaining. Because this portrayal of her shows short term thinking
J Kep
2024-11-15 14:20:05 +0000 UTCSince she can't make the recipe this is probably temporary for him until he leaves guild and can setup an alchemy area with a starry familar near his family. This will also greatly help baldy get to white when he reunites.
maube180
2024-11-15 13:19:02 +0000 UTCNope :) But then again, that's kinda the point. If he was good at this, he wouldn't have needed her as much.
PathOfPen
2024-11-15 12:27:50 +0000 UTCThey'll be sharing the expenses though. That's just her cut of the profits. Just wait a couple more chapters and you'll see some more numbers fleshing out the specifics of the deal.
PathOfPen
2024-11-15 12:26:51 +0000 UTCExactly and for someone without any production capabilities and being a small time business owner she is too fucking arrogant to be demanding such a high profit share over her limited skills. He would be way better off going back to his family and using those connections to simply ply his trade as he'd have a violet on his side instead of a yellow.
Arav Shah
2024-11-15 11:55:00 +0000 UTCHe isn't a good negotiator 💀💀
Arav Shah
2024-11-15 11:51:45 +0000 UTCIf she is getting a 35% cut of the sale price and expenses are coming out of Percy's share, she has no incentive to minimise costs, and Percy will likely end up with less than half anyway. I broke down the expected amounts and costs: Cost of production: His yield (0.68x0.68) = 0.4624 = 46.24% 19 per day/0.4624 = 41.09... basic elixirs every day 41.09... x 30 days = 1232.70... elixirs a month 1232.70... x 400 points (price of elixir) = 493,079.5848 points a month in pure point cost, he is also working flat out. Cost of sale: ~15% of Gross =1,109,429.066 points Gross income: 1232.70... x 400 points x 15 (if we're generous) = 7,396,193.772 points 35% (Nesha-profit): 2,588,667.82 points 65% (Percy-gross): 4,807,525.952 points profit: 4,807,525.952 points - 1,109,429.066 points - 493,079.5848 points =3,205,017.301 points =43.33%
Jethro H
2024-11-15 11:26:41 +0000 UTCTFTC!
Travis Smith
2024-11-15 10:58:44 +0000 UTC