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Chapter 227 – Rambert

“For a second there, I wasn’t sure you’d help us.” Percy said. “What choice did I even have?” Rambert shrugged as he walked closer. The only

“For a second there, I wasn’t sure you’d help us.” Percy said.

“What choice did I even have?” Rambert shrugged as he walked closer.

The only reason he was alive was because Percy had turned him into a clone. Of course, Percy had been pretty banged up after their battle, but Micky had made things easier for him by eating Grian’s soul.

“I’ve upheld my end of the bargain. Betrayed my House for you. Even rushed here to save you from the fucking Divine Root. It’s time to do your part.”

Percy nodded. Naturally, Rambert wouldn’t have helped the man who’d killed him out of kindness. His hastily stitched-up soul wouldn’t hold by itself. Percy had intentionally left the seals incomplete, as a fail-safe in case Rambert decided to betray him.

And that wasn’t even the biggest issue. Ironically, it was the Moirais’ Decree that did the most harm, by sucking out any life mana Rambert tried to use to heal his body. This was why he was still in this decrepit state despite his bloodline. Even after slaughtering every single resident of Bogside town, it wouldn’t have been enough to repair his second core. Not that Percy would have ever allowed him to commit such an atrocity – of course.

Currently, there was only one person in the entire province capable of fixing Rambert in time, and he couldn’t even hope to set up a meeting with Archibald unless Percy talked to his grandpa first.

“I promised you a chance, not a certainty. And things have gotten even more complicated since then. Before we dive into the details, I’ll need to confirm a few things with you.” Percy replied.

Walking by his side, Nesha helped him up. She looked a little better than before, the potion having lifted the bulk of her exhaustion. Still, Percy wouldn’t have involved her in this fight if he could’ve helped it. While she’d already proven herself, her mobility and defences were lacking. Had the fight lasted longer, or had Percy not already deciphered Jason’s abilities, things could have gone badly. This was why he’d hoped to take him down by himself. Sadly, things hadn’t gone to plan…

“Just do what you must.” Rambert nodded.

“To start, I’ll need your word that you’ll never tell a soul about my secrets. In fact, you shouldn’t even mention me or Nesha again.”

Rambert grimaced upon hearing his first demand. Percy didn’t press him either, waiting for him to come to terms. Of course, they both knew that Rambert hated him with a passion – it wasn’t like he’d hidden it – but he’d have to make some concessions if he wanted to walk out of this forest alive.

Even giving him this chance was merely out of principle. Now that Percy had gotten everything he needed from Rambert, it would be easier and safer to just dispose of him. Still, he wasn’t one to go back on his word. Lying to a dead person for personal gain was cruel, even for an enemy.

“Fine.” Rambert spat after a while. “I won’t pretend to like it, but I’ve seen enough that I don’t ever want to involve myself with you again. Besides, I’m sure the Divine Root will get to you soon enough…”

Percy listened to Rambert’s answer while paying close attention to Nesha with his Mana Sense. Only after failing to get a reaction did he allow himself to relax.

“Next, swear you’ll never lay a finger on any member of House Avalon.”

“Tsch. A bit much, isn’t it?!” Rambert snarled.

“Rambert, I’m not playing games with you. Do as I ask or our deal is off.” Percy stared at him coldly.

“Listen, pal… I’ve no intention of participating in this war a moment longer. Or even staying in this province for that matter. My family is bound to figure out I’ve robbed them clean, if they haven’t already. I want nothing more than to get healed and run halfway across Remior.”

“That’s not what I asked.” Percy didn’t relent.

But Rambert gritted his teeth.

“Look. I’ve got no beef with your House. If I’m willing to put down my feud with you, then why would I give a shit about anyone else? But those are hundreds of people we’re talking about, all of whom hate me. I’m going to defend myself if anybody attacks me.”

Nesha’s core remained still once more, confirming Rambert’s sincerity. Of course, it wasn’t exactly the answer Percy was looking for, but it was fair.

“Good enough. Last question. How many innocent people have you fed to your bloodline?”

This time, Percy didn’t even need to wait for Nesha to know he’d struck a nerve. At least, he hadn’t missed the cold shiver jolting through the man’s soul.

“I’ve… had to do it a few times that I’m not proud of…” Rambert replied, looking away in what appeared to be genuine shame.

Still, Percy hadn’t missed Nesha’s core flaring up the moment the word ‘few’ popped up.

“Under thirty?”

“Yes.”

A lie.

“Any children among them?”

“No.”

Another lie. The poor guy had no idea he had a truth-seeker scrutinizing his every word. By now, Percy had already made his mind up, though he still wanted to know one more thing.

“Why did you do it?”

“You don’t know what Drain is like, ok? It’s nothing like your bloodline, giving you everything you could have ever hoped for. For me, it’s just a curse. It just erodes at my sanity and my self-control, until I give in.”

Percy nodded. He knew it wasn’t entirely their fault, though none of the members of House Tantalus he’d met had shown much regret in their actions.

“I can’t really say I understand, but that’s beside the point. I’m sure you’ll do it again, sooner or later. And your next victim will be on me. Sorry.

“You bastard! WE HAD A DEAL!!!” Rambert yelled, his core lighting up in fury as he leapt towards Percy, his hand igniting.

Sadly for him, he didn’t even get to reach his target before his eyes glazed over. By the time the corpse landed on the ground, Percy’s wisp had returned to him, conveniently flooding his mind with an influx of memories. Of course, his clone had kept him relatively informed during the past month, though some details were easier to comprehend this way.

“Micky! Two Green cores for you!” Percy yelled.

Soon, the crow waddled over eagerly, having remained by Nesha’s side throughout the fight. He hadn’t been in a condition to intervene, though his involvement couldn’t be understated, regardless. After all, it was through him that Percy had managed to coordinate with Nesha.

In any case, the familiar started with Jason’s body, apparently finding it a great deal more appetizing. Percy ignored him, searching Rambert’s corpse instead. It didn’t take him long to find the five spatial amulets the dead mage had stolen from his family’s vault, stuffing them with elixirs.

“Wow! How many are there?” Nesha asked.

“According to our estimates, around 175 thousand doses. Their entire stash for the next three years.” Percy replied, checking the storage devices one after the other.

“That much?!” Nesha was taken aback.

Percy shrugged.

“It’s a little more than the standard, but they’ve also lost a lot of people during the war. It must’ve massively cut their consumption down…”

Each of the amulets was no larger than his own, containing about one cubic metre of space. Naturally, that was plenty to accommodate tens of thousands of the pinky-sized vials, though Rambert had still been forced to pack them quite tightly to make all of them fit.

“Percy… with this much…” Nesha spoke again, apparently having done the math in her head.

“Indeed. They should last us for well over a decade. Enough for all of us to advance. And we can do that even faster, once we make it to the Thirsty Valley…”

Next, he scratched his head upon thinking of a problem.

“I’m almost out of rainbow grass. We’ll need to get more within the next couple of months.”

“It won’t be easy. Now that the Divine Root knows it’s part of the recipe, they’ll have their eyes out for any large movements.”

Percy sighed. It was true, though he didn’t regret telling Deimos about it. He still hoped they wouldn’t give Orin much trouble. Besides, they’d probably figured that part out already. At any rate, this meant they’d have to be more careful when procuring it. That, or Percy would have to find a different deattunement ingredient to replace it – neither of which was going to be easy.

“At least, Jason is dead. Hopefully, they don’t have any other karma users.”

Neither he nor Nesha said anything else. Instead, they took a seat by the base of a nearby tree, watching Micky as he disposed of the bodies. It was a rather disturbing scene, as always, but Percy was happy to see his familiar a lot more energetic than he’d been in weeks. As good as Regulation was, it couldn’t entirely replace a proper meal.

‘It’ll make our journey easier, at least…’ he smiled.

Next, he looked down in his hand, fiddling with a small box he’d also looted from Rambert. An unexpected treasure.

“What’s that?” Nesha asked, apparently only now noticing it.

Percy’s lips couldn’t help but part upon hearing the question, revealing a bright, toothy grin. Opening the latch on the box, he lifted its lid, as both of their eyes landed on the aquamarine-coloured object shimmering within.

It looked a little like a petal, though it was rather oblong. Furthermore, it had an oval hole in its middle, the rest of its surface looping around it. In fact, its glow seemed to travel in wave-like patterns around the petal, almost giving it the appearance of a river…

“Is that what I think it is?!” Nesha seemed to have put two and two together.

“Yeap…”

Comments

sigh.... if you don't have anything good to say...

Dragonkinn

Agreed, loved the switch up and the conclusion.

Jordan Raitt

I couldn't have put it any better myself and wholeheartedly agree. The twist you introduced here is not worth it. It might be more defendable in the context of a serialized webfiction where the reader is reading along at the same pace as the story is being released, but for someone who will pick up this story after the fact, this will just feel like cheap suspense

Alberto Sanchez

Good ending thanks.

Hellnhavoc

At least it was resolved quickly. Still, I agree with the others. You can accomplish the same thing with some minor changes to the final fight chapter with Rambert before homecoming.

Lenora

Yeah, very disappointed with the rambert plot. Its traded reader investment and trust of narration, in exchange for suspense, that isn't really there for most experienced readers, or anyone who can pick up on basic foreshadowing. A very, very worrying precedent for the story, when the main characters pov cannot be trusted. Also, suspense is based on known stakes. For it to work correctly, the reader must have all the pieces that are necessary. Twists are fine, but must be handled carefully, and usually should not be something hidden from the reader, if known by the mc. The mc is our vehicle through which we experience and invest in the world. Our link to it. If the reader knows too much more than the mc, it can cause frustration due to that dissonance in the connection. Conversely, if the mc knows and plots too much, without it being revealed to the reader until the final moment, what is the point of reading at all? There is no suspense, as you are faced with a simple puzzle, missing important pieces. It is better to have a complex puzzle, with all the pieces in play, so that it is difficult for the reader to predict, but "fair." Otherwise, avoid puzzles, as its a cheap cop out to instead just remove pieces that the reader should have, if the narration is reliable. This situation could work, sort of, without the same reader fatigue and concern, if this was a psychological thriller, or some such. Something where an unreliable narrator is built into the story structure, and the plot and chain of events are chaotic and blurry. An expectation of a puzzle so to speak. Shoving a really weak puzzle into an action story, is a recipe for frustration. Thats why so many readers reacted negatively, and why almost everyone predicted what happened. It wasn't hard to guess, just disappointing... I really hope this was a one off, because more than once like this, will kill the story. Its already done damage. Now, every single time there's a difficult fight or scenario, without every single clone and other factor explicitly mentioned, the reader will have to choose between two expectations, instead of the previous one: Formerly: that a breakthrough will happen to turn the tide, an established trap, or preparation. This was all in play in the battle against rambert and the others from tantalus in the swamp. Now, expectation two: that some sort of ass pull will pop out, and save the day. This means, when the reader wants to be intensely absorbed into the hype of the fight, the stakes, and the question of where things will go, what will be lost, what will be gained, instead, the reader will also have to ask, will none of that happen, with a hidden (from the reader) card saving the day instead. This undermines the entire point of suspense and stakes in the first place. It means that it doesnt matter. Percy must survive for the story to continue. We always knew that. But now, we don't know if we will know what will save him, until it does, not because it is novel, or surprising, or unique, or a new discovery, but because it something hidden from exclusively the reader. It also creates a barrier between the reader and the main point of view, the main story. Its no longer what we should know for the story, sticking to a watsonian view, with all the boring stuff cut out, but rather what the author, in a doylist view, wishes the reader to know, to toy with out emotions. To summarise, this method lacks any subtlety. It is telling, not showing, in a sense. Rather than allowing the story itself to toy with our emotions, it is an iron hand controlling what we know to force things, unnaturally.

Nanoninja3330

I was real worried Percy was gonna let him live, finally an author that understands it doesn't matter how interesting the world building, how interesting the system/magic is, if the MC isn't someone you can read and see through their eyes and live the story with, bravo Author. It's a testament to how good story is that me ( a tight fisted Scotsman) is shelling out 18 bucks a month.

Michael Mckenzie

I Still don't get WHY he wants the Petal. If he changes his Pure core into water, he can't make Aurora Dew anymore, or use a lot of his kit.

Osamaru Ta

Thanks; so many possibilities there.

Dove

Currently, each elixir->aurora dew session requires 4 doses of elixirs, 4 crystals (each of which takes 7 minutes to condense) and takes 15 minutes. In other words, it takes him 28 minutes to prepare the crystals and another 15 minutes for actual alchemy, to produce 2.24 doses of AD (at 56% efficiency). His conversion rate is always increasing very, very slowly, but he's already at a place where even single percentage point can take years. (It's at 42% for regular elixirs, i.e. 3 alchemy steps, and that's after being boosted greatly by his eyes.) Experimenting with new ingredients would definitely be easier for him, as he's a lot more experienced and has his eyes to help him. However, changing secondary ingredients won't affect the main product. He'd need to upgrade the powder or the nectar in some way to actually make the elixirs more effective. As for the petal question, well... Percy will share his thoughts with you guys tomorrow :)

PathOfPen

How many Aurora Dew elixirs can Percy brew in a day? And whatever his current conversion rate is, can we assume it’ll get better as he brews more and more of them? I’m assuming with his new eyes he’ll be able to see new ingredients that will work as well as the rainbow grass, or even better? And the big question that’s been asked many times here: after he gives up his pure affinity and replaces it with water, how will he make the powder he needs for the Aurora Dew? I’m hoping he’ll be able to come up with something that will brew even better, but… so many unanswered questions. His time before he has to use the lotus petal is short so he needs to condense powder pretty much 24/7 for a little bit before he uses the petal.

Dove

Im very happy rambert is finally dead and not part of a longer running plot. I would however consider removing the rambert pov plot, write him into the previous chapter as a cliffhanger and then end the arc with percys soul pov.

Epeen

Chapters will continue normally. Tomorrow you’re getting the first chapter of book 3, Chapter 228 - Lotus of a Myriad Rivers

PathOfPen

Loved your book, thank you for the time and efforts you spent writting it ! Now that book one has ended, how will the publishing schedule change, will there be a hyatus or will the chapters keep coming once a day ? Thank you

CAMUS MAXIME

Well, he earnestly promised him a chance, but he can't have him going around killing random people, hurting his relatives or blabbing about him and Nesha

PathOfPen

I'd say the biggest issue with Rambert is that Percy has to go back on his deal right after saying he's going to keep his word. Be much cleaner if he died in the fight.

R. Maxwell Steele

I think you got me wrong. Not a native English speaker here. What I mean is: we have a POV with him only thinking of revenge and angry thoughts, without mentioning the process of getting patched from Percy. A POV without showing us the gun you are saying was in his head, just for a suspense that do not exist.

Leonardo Krieck

He obviously knew about it, but the clone was holding his soul together. Metaphorical gun to the head, so he didn't say anything.

R. Maxwell Steele

Gz! :)

EsZeus

Not the worst that could have happened. The principal problem was that, in order to hide this from us, you change the dynamics of the soul clone. In the pov rampart survives and got to the family compound there is no way he don't know about the clone that have patch him up, making the charade meaningless. I thinking some changes in that parts would be better IMO. Great work tho. Beware of insurmountable odds, in a realistic scenario Deimos will have an arm of people roaming and a blue scort with his karma mage.

Leonardo Krieck

Maybe some more foreshadowing within the chapter of Ramberts resurfacing would be good to prevent startling some future readers. Maybe a rant of Rambert about Percy knowing of His revenge.

Xorvivs

Nice

Karait

Hibernation evolved a few chapters ago. The original only slows down his beast mana consumption, but Regulation also lets him convert some air mana to beast mana more efficiently through his mutations.

PathOfPen

I'm happy with the Rambert conclusion! The hints you've provided seem more obvious now in hindsight. Thank you for the great chapter

Show

As good as Regulation was -> Hibernation?

ThoMiCroN

Thanks for both the chapter and the book PoP. Good job!

Matt Hazel


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