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Chapter Eighteen (0.18.0) Update #1

I feel like there's something I needed to... oh, yeah! That! It's getting to the end of the month and I needed to announce that Chapter 18 is officially in development. There was some wrestling with scene placement and pacing during the earlier plotting stages, but once the final order got sorted it, we were able to get back into the swing of things. 

There's no denying that the prior chapter (17) was a travel episode, much different than anything we'd done before, with multiple short stops at locations that'll never be revisited. Which is a shame, because I liked some of outdoors locations. 18 will start out that way, especially after the cliffhanger, but, by the end, you'll have Jack and the group (I almost said "Jack and the girls" there) into somewhere a little more stationary. Not a permanent residence, but one in which to set up the remainder of the story's events. Kind of a "base of operations" for the time being. Also, one where the sets can be reused for multiple scenes, which should allow for more in-depth character moments. 

Because, in truth, keeping them on the move makes it challenging to delve into their more nuanced relationships. Those conversations are there, but you always get the feeling that more could be said if they just had somewhere to relax. The cast is more focused on the immediacy of their situation and the danger inherent in the unfamiliar. Once the illusion of safety returns, they might stop for more than a few minutes to catch up. This means that there'll soon be a better balance between character arcs and pushing the main story towards it's inevitable completion. Right now, to me, there feels like a lot of plot points still needed to tackle, but I think with the room left in the plot document, we'll manage it just fine. 

I mean, we're really the ones who decide how long this is, right?

Thanks for your support and your interest,
- Kinderfeld

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Comments

*whew*. Thought you were adding sausages to the meal.

Dubsington

I'm always so impressed by how fast you guys are working, providing us with new chapters basically every month, and yet no lack of quality whatsoever. I really love this series and will continue to support you until the very end. ❤

Thibbs

Well, even when the older ladies are going out with each other, they say they're having a girls' night out, so I think you get a pass.

Tretuon

I don't think the story has another 100 in it, but the original plan was for 24 total chapters. Based on how much story is left to wrap up plus endings/epilogues, it might run an extra chapter or two.

ILSProductions

More that I really can't call Alice one of the girls. Considering she's older than Jack. :)

ILSProductions

So, "Jack and the group" != "Jack and the girls"?! Uh oh. You're not looking to add new content tags onto this thing, are you?

Dubsington

This is probably the best written and most consistent character writing in any AVN I've tried. The story telling is outstanding. If you ever remaster this with ultra-high quality renders and graphic art, such as with "Being a DIK", you should sell it. This is really a great AVN.

danielwpeer

I'm with Pax :)

Neukom720

Hey, I'm with you for the target of 100 chapters :) (I think that an even 100 chapters has a nice ring to it... ) Really, I hope that we have at least another 8-10 chapters and I'm good with going beyond that if you have more story to tell, especially if we can get some nice epilogue moments - (Now & Then and a few years later). Thanks for the update and peek at the future!

Pax


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