Intrepid, Inept, Inevitably Worm-food (?/M, BoA, BoF, NC, OV, MV, D, SD)
Added 2024-02-01 14:00:06 +0000 UTCHello friends.
Today I am attaching the second winner of December 15's poll.
Remember: I have already provided the password and the tag meanings on my other page.
Enjoy.
Comments
Thank you for the comment, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this story. It's perfectly fine that you don't have any constructive criticism -- I was also pleased with how this story came out, and it's nice to get that verbally, externally validated once in a while. I can definitely keep up with the same kind of topic.
K.D.
2024-02-04 13:57:59 +0000 UTCI finally got the time to read this, and I have to say its my new favourite story of yours. I'm sorry I don't have more useful or constructive feedback, but there isn't a single part about this I don't like. I love how the preds being worms, usually an incredibly lowly creature, ties into the sense of humiliation and overpowering that the characters go through. The way you describe the characters being totally overpowered, completely powerless to resist being violated and devoured, its just perfect. All of the scenes were very good, but my personal favourite was Leo's demise - you really got the tone right of him going from the respected strong leader, to being pulled under, stripped, forced into arousal, and easily devoured like nothing in a matter of seconds. I honestly could keep going, but I'll stop rambling - tl;dr, this one is fantastic.
Perdrews
2024-02-04 12:06:00 +0000 UTC
