【ENG ver】Manga about a girl holding up a toilet
Added 2022-10-03 13:43:18 +0000 UTC(注意)
ここは初めての海外の支援者の方向け記事です。
海外の方もすこし見てくださっているみたいなので挑戦です。
いつものような日本語のイラストも進めているのでお待ちいただけると嬉しいです。
●ENGLISH(used google translate and deepl)
This is the English version of the comic I drew.
Since I do not speak English at all, I translated it mechanically using the Internet.
We did this work in the hope that it would be somewhat easier for people who do not understand Japanese to get a feel for the atmosphere.
Please forgive me for grammar, spelling, and various other mistakes.
More importantly, if there are any major mistakes, I would appreciate it if you could tell me the correct word or natural conversation in your comments.
Thank you for all the comments on my last article.
I was happy to see that there were more positive comments on the translation than I had imagined.
I hope to reply to your comments in this article. I apologize for not being able to reply individually.
I would like to respond specifically to one of the comments you received regarding the transcription of the text.
The transcription is a great idea and I thought I would implement it. However, I wanted to show the illustrations and text at the same time since it is a comic book, so I did the translation work.
I am not sure which is better, a transcription of the Japanese text or a mechanically translated COMIC.
Transcribing Japanese sentences is easier work than translation. However, I would prefer to choose the one you all enjoy.
I look forward to your comments and opinions.
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Comments
Thank you for your comment. I appreciate you noticing the minor error. I am very happy if my translation made it easier for you to understand what kind of content I am talking about.
わたからし
2022-10-06 07:25:02 +0000 UTCfox boy さん Thank you for your message. I had never worked on a translation before, so it was quite fun. I will proceed when the mood strikes me.
わたからし
2022-10-05 13:07:23 +0000 UTCOther issues I noticed are mostly localization issues. Kind of hard to fix unless you know the language. その他に気づいたのは、ほとんどがローカライズの問題です。 その言語を知らない限り、修正するのはちょっと難しいですね。
Flynski
2022-10-04 05:53:49 +0000 UTCこれはすごい! 完全な翻訳をしていただき、ありがとうございます。 私個人としては、トランスクリプトではなく、翻訳されたバージョンがある方が好きなんです。どちらも良いのですが、私は翻訳の方が好きです。 テキストが少ないので、私自身のバージョンも作成し、比較することで、より良いものを作ることができると思います。私はそれをここにのみ投稿します。 今までの私のヒントは -日本語から英語への変換で、LとRが混同することがある。 ということで、reRaxではなく、reLax のように単語がつながっているものもあります。 (Ihaven't gone + Iwoke up)( I haven't gone) + (I woke up) stomacH not stomacK 英語は変です。
Flynski
2022-10-04 05:52:23 +0000 UTCThis is great! Thank you for doing a full translation. Me personally, I prefer having a translated version, as instead of a transcript. Both are fine, but I prefer a translation. Since there isn't much text to this, I might do my own version as well to kind of get a comparison for you to improve on. I'd be posting it here only. マイナーな批評 critiques My tips so far are: L and R get mixed up sometimes with Japanese to english I've noticed. (I believe L is not in japanese.) so reLax instead of reRax Some of the words are connected together like Ihaven't gone + Iwoke up ( I haven't gone) + (I woke up) That issue will fix over time, so not really an issue. stomacH not stomacK English is weird.
Flynski
2022-10-04 05:52:20 +0000 UTCThe extra effort is really appreciated! I just hope it doesn't become a hassle for you, and slow you down. I wouldn't want the Japanese followers to have to wait longer because you have to work on translations.
fox boy
2022-10-03 18:48:40 +0000 UTC
