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Added 2021-02-05 16:00:04 +0000 UTCLets give a try to this holly water...
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Hi Dan, thanks for the fixes, the page suppose to got a spell check. Im sorry for that, some times is difficult to express ideas in other language. I fixed the page. Thanks again for your help.
GULAVISUAL
2021-02-08 16:41:55 +0000 UTCIt would be religions' monks. And I think the last line is saying she doesn't think the holy water will work to cleans the evil. But you're thoughts are just as likely.
Jefferson R Boydston
2021-02-06 08:22:23 +0000 UTCHi Gala, love your comics. There are a fair few English errors in this one. I'll write down how the script should look. (Skipping the boxes that don't have any issues) "I have special holy water in this container!" "Blessed by seven different religions monks" "It is a powerful force against demons!" "I just have to dive these fat whales into the water!" "I don't think it will be large enough but we can give it a try" With that last one, you might have meant this instead: "I don't think it will be enough water but we can give it a try" I'm not sure if you meant the container isn't large enough to fit both boobs in it (1st option) or if there isn't enough water to fully cover the boobs (2nd option). I think the container not being large enough makes more sense.
Dan
2021-02-05 22:06:02 +0000 UTC
