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LITTLENUNS comic36

Please let me know if there is any strange English.😌

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Oh, I just noticed something else. You forgot one N in "training" in the 4th panel. But that's the only mistake. 😊

Marcel

thankyou!!marcel😊

Diva

Wow, I didn't expect her to be that strong! πŸ’ͺ Your English is on point today! You could maybe argue that "more powerful" should be replaced with "stronger", but I wouldn't do that. Powerful sounds a lot cuter coming from a child. 😊

Marcel


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