Gift of Hedone: Story Help (Spoilers)
Added 2024-12-30 22:00:03 +0000 UTCSpoilers Ahead.
Story Spoilers Ahead.
Hello you sexy deviants,
So the first actual playable story scene I plan to have is your village getting raided.
This is an opportunity for you to get the feel for combat. This will ultimately lead to your defeat in battle gravely injuring you.
The Princess will find you, and this is where I need your help.
I want you and the Princess to get "intimate" in order to save your life, and I want to use it as an opportunity to set the stage on consent as well.
My current thoughts are that you will be laying there injured, and the princess will find you and mention that she can save you, but you are going to need to consume her natural juices (plan to have her sit on your face) And the healing properties will do their work.
I want this to be a question you choose, between yes, and no. But it would be like:
Princess "May I sit on your face?"
Your options "Yes Please! Be my guest, even if I perish, I do it happy!" and "No thank you" or something, but the yes will be an enthusiastic yes.
If you select No, the game would end haha
How do you all feel about this, do you like this idea, do you think it comfortably also portrays consent, or do you think there should be a different way to do it?
Comments
its a pleasure try to help with this amazing project ^^
Allévoy
2024-12-31 11:08:06 +0000 UTCThank you for the feedback and suggestion Touta, the idea of a final warning makes sense rather than a super abrupt end. :)
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 11:07:07 +0000 UTCThank you as always for your suggestions and feedback, I really like the hooded princess, need to figure that out in the bigger picture, but thank you my friend!
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 11:06:11 +0000 UTCReally appreciate the feedback Kai, I was thinking a similar thing about an less invasive first meet up, and then a more intimate secondary interaction :) Thank you for taking the time type this and comment
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 11:05:08 +0000 UTCMaybe do it so; When you say no the princess will say that you will really die and that this is the only Option to help. Than you get the choice again with no leeding to the gameover. Also really like the hooded person idea.
touta konoe
2024-12-31 10:55:48 +0000 UTCas small suggestions: Maybe the princess should be hooded or something and not be recognized in the first instance until a next meeting? and the ways when asking to be saved... perhaps something simpler but intense, that shows that you don't want to die more than having the mysterious hooded woman sitting on your face hahaha
Allévoy
2024-12-31 08:47:46 +0000 UTCI've seen the nursing hand job comment and feel that would work best, maybe after you've agreed you slowly wake up with the taste of her breastmilk in your mouth, then you shyly pull away but she asks that you continue moreso until the healing is complete? Then maybe to "fulfill" the promise lead onto an intimate scene where she gives a blow job then we eat her out before passionate love making maybe?
Kai Grimm
2024-12-31 07:45:18 +0000 UTCAll good, appreciate the suggestions 🙂
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 03:37:27 +0000 UTCOh dude that’s a great idea
Jr Paul
2024-12-31 00:50:40 +0000 UTCOh sorry maybe a *hesitate* princess:"we don't have much time pls say something" PC:"ok I will do it" ? That could be a bit pushy though so I don't know if that is better 😅
Just_L
2024-12-31 00:47:47 +0000 UTCI really appreciate the honesty and feedback plant bro, the dialogue itself was just a place holder, but that was something I was also a bit concerned about in terms of portraying consent. So thank you for taking the time to comment 🙂
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 00:38:57 +0000 UTCWhilst that would be cool, and I really appreciate the suggestion it would unfortunately go against the consensual direction of the game
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 00:37:06 +0000 UTCThat's a valid point, thank you for the comment and feedback Bkpr 🙂
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 00:36:12 +0000 UTCThank you, glad you enjoy the idea!
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 00:35:39 +0000 UTCReally appreciate the feedback DIGI!
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 00:35:25 +0000 UTCHey L, Thank you for the comment, and that would be pretty funny, however it would go against the consensual direction of the game, but the input is greatly appreciated 😊
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 00:35:02 +0000 UTCReally appreciate the suggestion, however their "interaction" between one another is a story catalyst
Jiggly Pixels
2024-12-31 00:33:56 +0000 UTCWhat if possible.... To have an alternate scene where you fend off the raid, however you succumb still to your injuries? But I would say make it INSANELY hard or RNG based to do so. Just a thought for a little extra spice for the "hardcore" gamers maybe?
Rickey
2024-12-31 00:26:01 +0000 UTCI would do a enthusiastic "yes pls!!!!" Kind of option and an option where you hesitate to answer and she then just goes for it to safe you ... Maybe with the second option you get an "you could have died there" later when you are safed
Just_L
2024-12-31 00:00:56 +0000 UTCEven a false negative response could work, e.g. you say "At the cost of my life. I wish not to pervert you, princess." & the princess could just make a royal command he can't refuse & just sit on his face 😂😂
Dr. Wibbert
2024-12-30 23:18:54 +0000 UTCNot sure how it portrays the topic of consent since it's a "do it or else (you die)" scenario. the "even if I perish, I do it happy" sounds to needy the way it's phrased but that might just be me. still really like the game ending if you say no. gives the feel of your choices mattering with tangible consequences + it's funny to me.
PlantBro
2024-12-30 23:05:42 +0000 UTCPerhaps a nursing handjob scene
PlantBro
2024-12-30 23:00:06 +0000 UTCI love the idea of the princess cumming on your face heals you 🤣 that’s amazing I love it 10/10
Jr Paul
2024-12-30 22:58:52 +0000 UTCI think in this case, add some urgency to this encounter. If your village is being raided and you’ve been injured, you’d want to get back on your feet and take the fight to your attackers as soon as you could - this doubles with making the tutorial flow quickly and not feel too drawn-out.
Bkpr
2024-12-30 22:11:23 +0000 UTCI believe her breast milk would be a better option to heal you instead
DIGI
2024-12-30 22:05:52 +0000 UTC
